This might be my favorite poem right next to A Dream Within A Dream by Edgar Allan Poe. Amazing use of language, deep message, just beautiful all around.
PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2020
I'd love to see more existential poetry. I gobble up angsty, philosophical inquiries followed by monologuing with glee. Also, aaaa that quote! I love it!!! Most people skimming through probably won't notice, but it fits seamlessly into the poem. I like that you actually address it AND use it properly without taking things out of context. Sorry for going on and on. I swear it's a good thing! I hope I helped somewhat. I'm not an expert by any means, but I think sometimes the eye of the average person will notice things even pros won't think about.