liak

United States

My name is Lia and I'm fifteen years old. I'm a poet and a writer focusing on realistic fiction. I'd love to try my hand at writing sci-fi one day. My pronouns are she/her or they/them. I hope you enjoy my work!

liak (United States) liked gCaAtRsLbYy || #Pov'sLovedandLost2 by poetri (United States)

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liak (United States) published:

Late Love Letter to My Late Soulmate

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I’ve felt the pain of losing you
Over and over and over again.
Every time I lay down to sleep,
When I open my eyes in the morning.
I have no doubt that I will feel it again
When I close my eyes for the final time.
But for tonight,
I’ll hold myself close.
Hold myself like I wish you would.
I’ll hold myself the way you held yourself
All those years ago in the corner
Of the only place...

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8 months ago

liak (United States) reviewed:

Visiting My Mother Is Like A Song

PROMPT: Open Prompt

I'd recommend making it longer and adding more emotional language. This is a very emotional topic and should evoke sadness in the reader. By describing how the music makes you feel, talk about the tightness in your chest or the...

8 months ago

liak (United States) reviewed:

Why I Love Glendalough So Much:

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I liked this piece a lot, it was entertaining, but the tone was somewhat informative in the second half. That's not necessarily a bad thing, especially because the tone switch flows pretty well. I also appreciated the line "With the...

8 months ago

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liak (United States) published:

#pov'sLovedandLost(1) Apollo and Hyacinthus

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i.
i never liked comparing you
to something as simple
as a flower
but my dear hyacinthus,
i simply have no other words.
how can you describe a feeling
with no name?
how can someone describe
the pleasant weight in my stomach
and leap of my heart
when you call my name?
or the way i get lightheaded
and the way blood rushes
to my face when you look at me
the way you do?

ii.
despite my imperfections,
despite...

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liak (United States) published:

The Night We Broke Up For A Second Time

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    After a month together you said we didn't click; after I agreed, that was the end of it. After a few weeks, my friends came to me told me everything you said about me behind my back. After that, I was angry, angrier than I was when you took me to prom and ignored me the entire night.
 
     After my friends told me, we went down to the creek that splits our little city in half. After...

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