Rosie2020 (Canada) published:
FREE WRITING
The film “Freedom Writers,” directed by Richard LaGravenese, explores how young people can confront their biases through storytelling and find common ground with their peers. Set in a high school in Los Angeles, America, the film displays a diverse range of young characters, each with their own narrative and challenges, and focusses on a class of students who portrayed as delinquents or hooligans. There is a clear racial divide in the class, and the intolerance is propelled by gang violence, frequent exposure to the death of people near to them, a lack of education, drug and alcohol abuse, and a lack of...
5 months ago
Rosie2020 (Canada) published:
FREE WRITING
The film “Freedom Writers,” directed by Richard LaGravenese, explores how young people can confront their biases through storytelling and find common ground with their peers. Set in a high school in Los Angeles, America, the film displays a diverse range of young characters, each with their own narrative and challenges, and focusses on a class of students who portrayed as delinquents or hooligans. There is a clear racial divide in the class, and the intolerance is propelled by gang violence, frequent exposure to the death of people near to them, a lack of education, drug and alcohol abuse, and a lack of...
5 months ago
Rosie2020 (Canada) published:
FREE WRITING
The film “Freedom Writers,” directed by Richard LaGravenese, explores how young people can confront their biases through storytelling and find common ground with their peers. Set in a high school in Los Angeles, America, the film displays a diverse range of young characters, each with their own narrative and challenges, and focusses on a class of students who portrayed as delinquents or hooligans. There is a clear racial divide in the class, and the intolerance is propelled by gang violence, frequent exposure to the death of people near to them, a lack of education, drug and alcohol abuse, and a lack of...
5 months ago
Rosie2020 (Canada) published:
FREE WRITING
I am elephant waiting for elephant my lucnh at the busy elephant cafeteria and I'm really hoping thatit doesn't come with mustard on it like it did lats time. It's so frustrating when things doen't taste the way theydo in my head. I'm sdelephant distracted as I write this becausemy friend is texting me and notifications are really loud and I want to read them but I have 4 inutes of this left or something like. I once ate 8...
5 months ago
Rosie2020 (Canada) published:
FREE WRITING
I never thought I’d die on a Friday. A slight exaggeration, because I’m only walking down a street, but this is no ordinary street. It a crowded, reeking, excessively noisy, animal infested, filthy marketplace street in central India. I hate travelling from the depths of my cold and despairing heart. Why are there dogs in the middle of the road? I am not inclined to pick up rabies or God knows what from these ratty mongrels, but in these packed streets there is no room for avoiding such unwanted...
5 months ago
Rosie2020 (Canada) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
I would consider reviewing the grammar rules regarding the use of quotations and dialogue. I am not confident that I know them well enough to correct anything in your writing, but I fell there a few little adjustments to be...
11 months ago
Rosie2020 (Canada) reviewed:
FREE WRITING
I really like how you used the italics as God's voice, it made the narrative feel so much deeper.
11 months ago
Rosie2020 (Canada) reviewed:
PROMPT: Solidarity
In my edit at the bottom I said that the last line almost made me cry but in truth I have been crying since I read it. Excellent job.
11 months ago