Deep_Breaths

United States

I AM
owner of ALL the books
a grand writer (I hope!)
really hungry
1/3 of the Three Musketeers
feeling poetic
in love with life
#christian
a ballerina <3

Message from Writer

My Fave Books:
-The Hot Zone (by Richard Preston)
-The Giver (by Lois Lowry)
-Where the Forest Meets the Stars (by Glendy Vanderah)
-To All The Boys I've Loved Before Trilogy (by Jenny Han)
-The Fault in Our Stars (by John Green)
-Wilder Girls (by Rory Power)
-The School for Good and Evil series ( by Soman Chainani)
-ALL the Hunger Games (by Suzanne Collins)

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Deep_Breaths (United States) published:

yet they are beautiful, the flowers growing in my lungs are choking me

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See him and smile, he only walks away
Grow
Opening petals and creeping up my throat
No one knows
These flowers will be my demise
The flowers blossom out my mouth
The flowers grow in my chest
In my lungs their roots crawl and scratch
Agony 
Feelings rage on in spite of the pain
He doesn't feel the same way
The air floods from my lungs
Gasp
Flourish
He doesn't bother look my way
Like a rose thorn
I worship...
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Deep_Breaths (United States) liked Would you unfollow if I told you I'm- by SunV (India)

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Deep_Breaths (United States) published:

The Fine Line Between Love and Hate (updated)

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    I rub a sweaty hand across my bare scalp. The fabric of my pillow feels like a cactus, and my sheets like an oven. Gazing up at the stark, white ceiling of my reserved hospital room, I toss and turn, unable to fall back asleep. Just another perk of cancer. 
    Mom is out cold on the little chair in the corner of my room. I don't know how she sleeps there nearly every night. I sit up to see what...

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Deep_Breaths (United States) published:

The Doctor (chapter one)

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Tasha walks through the long hallway. Hands tightly clamped together. Three tall guards approach her and lead her to her destination.

Tasha is led to a dark room with interrogation mirrors on every wall, a fainting couch against one of the walls, a speaker and a microphone.

Tasha's heart pounds and she sits on the couch while nervously fidgets with her long hair. A crackling noise comes through the speaker and Tasha jumps in her seat.

"Hello, Tasha. Thank you...

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Deep_Breaths (United States) liked untitled rage and spite | men are trash by abi's pov (United States Minor Outlying Islands)

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Deep_Breaths (United States) liked *facepalms* by Anne Blackwood (United States)

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Ghost

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Thana
I call for Mother, only she can banish the demons that hide beneath the bed. I call again and again and again and she never even calls back. I make the leap for my door, feet almost hovering over the ground in fear that something will grab me. I run down the stairs leading downstairs. Mother is sitting on her chair, staring at something. 
"Mother, you didn't come help me." I say, trying to catch her eyes. She doesn't...
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Deep_Breaths (United States) liked Igniting by Huba Huba (United States)

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Deep_Breaths (United States) published:

The First Few Chapters of my Untitled Story (comments and criticism appreciated)

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Chapter One
Elphaya


The wind blows on my muted rosy cheeks. Golden sunlight leaves heavenly veins in the cropped auburn mess of hair my mother left to me. Pollen rests on my blush bottom lip. 
My pointed ears tingle slightly in the cold. I inhale the scents of the Earth and look out at the lights and social life of Higher Grounds.
I stand up to my lengthy three foot five inches height and stretch my long and skinny chartreuse...
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23 days ago

Deep_Breaths (United States) reviewed:

stars fallen apart

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I honestly just enjoyed this poem, very nice piece.

24 days ago