Jothsimar

Australia

I am a 13 year old girl who loves reading books. I have quite a few hobbies such as science, I love ice skating and I am a big fan on sports too. My friends tell me I am quite a personality.

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Jothsimar (Australia) published:

A Different Perspective

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I looked up at all the humans walking past me, on their way to work, or finding food for their small colonies. How do they move so fast? Why are they so different to us? Where are their antenna's? How do they walk on two legs? So many question, but so little answers, if only we were like them, then we could make our own noises out of our mouths and then we could have a new system to doing...

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about 2 months ago

Jothsimar (Australia) started following Shane Alimarin (Australia)

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Jothsimar (Australia) published:

Memories

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To some people, I seem like a rude child not wanting to talk to anyone about anything. They don't know what I've been through. Feeling the pain everyday. The images fresh in my mind like it happened yesterday. Every night I have nightmares of the night over and over and over again. I wonder if I could have saved him. I wonder if I could have saved my father. 

I grew up in a small, poor village where it was...

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4 months ago

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Jothsimar (Australia) published:

Scientific Inquiry Poem

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Scientist are like explores,
using what they know and see
to blaze a trail that, step by step,
will lead you to new discoveries.

Formulate, distill and focus,
narrow down, define the gist,
determine scope and pinpoint locus - 
this is your hypothesis. 

Gather all the stuff you need,
to put in play the machinations.
Document the happenings - 
these compromise your observations.

What things stay and what things stick?
Record the outcomes and effects.
Don't presume and don't predict...

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4 months ago

Jothsimar (Australia) reviewed:

Leaves

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2020

As you have probably seen in my other reviews for your writing, I am always commenting on the emotion in your stories as I think that you have a really good way of expressing feelings in your texts! I love...

7 months ago

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Jothsimar (Australia) published:

COMPETITION ON!!! - RESULTS!!!!

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Hi Guys!! Following on from the competition, I have now seen all the entries and come up with the top three pieces!! I am again sorry that there was a big delay and I wasn't able to get the results until now. I must say though, all the entries were at a very high level, and it was a VERY hard decision to come up with the winners! As you can see below, those were the agreed prizes that the...

7 months ago

Jothsimar (Australia) reviewed:

The Senses of Heaven

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You are an amazing writer!! I wanted to congratulate you again for coming second place in my competition!! I absolutely loved this piece!

7 months ago

Jothsimar (Australia) reviewed:

A Life in the Stars (PEER REVIEWS PLEASE)

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Overall, the piece is brilliant!! I love all the emotion shown and the storyline that you gave the readers! I hope I wasn't too harsh and I look forward to reviewing your other pieces!! :)

7 months ago

Jothsimar (Australia) liked Daily Goat Quote: Day 47 by CageySagey234 (United States)

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Jothsimar (Australia) liked A Life in the Stars by CageySagey234 (United States)

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