SmartlyStupid920

United States

Hello! I'm an American with big dreams. I am not a huge writer, but I want to get better! CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, NOT HATE. Thanks for looking at my writing.

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I have many poems, short stories, essays, reports, etc. If you're wondering why I don't have many published works, I unpublish early variations of the same piece to avoid confusion.

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Silver Lily

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     The date was  February 29, 2006. Beatrice and Dean were in bed, the happiest couple ever. It was their 1st anniversary as a married couple, and they were ready to take a nap before going to their dinner reservation when they heard a thud. They rushed downstairs and saw that a note had seemingly appeared on their countertop with a ring as a placeholder because the door mysteriously got opened to the backyard porch, even though it...
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Inveigled

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     He was there, in this house. He had tried so hard to leave, but it seemed so dark and foreign to him. He would start at the base of the staircase each time. There was some light in front of him, just enough to see where he could go. When he first started he had switched the kitchen light on to the right, trying to see. In return, darkness engulfed him in a wet cold blanket of sadness....

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Helmswoman’s Requiem

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     Driving over the dark waters of the lake, Rani looked into the distance. She had taken a break off of work to go see her friends, so she was riding in their jet ski that Sara had brought over. Sara’s blonde hair was whipping into Rani’s face, but Rani didn’t care, and she just sat in the seat, clinging to Sara’s lifejacket straps. As she soared through the air, laughing when they would be showered in the lake...

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Haikus and Limericks (Enjoy?)

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Haikus
We near the spring's end,
And watch seeds of the forest
fall into summer.

Grab dandelions
Remove and clean their leaves so
we can have salad

Limericks
Choices, choices, what is for lunch?
Chocolate Krave, Cinnamon Crunch?
Whatever I eat
must be pretty neat.
I really want something to munch. 

Look in the mirror, is my hair-
No! I don't care. When did I care?!
I don't get to school late
I'm  feeling just so great
When I realize...
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