lizharris

United States

You don't write because you want people to like you; you write because you want people to listen.

Peer Reviews

The Fourth Death

PROMPT: All Talk

This is FANTASTIC! You're a great writer!

over 4 years

Morning

PROMPT: 0-9

over 4 years

Real Questions

PROMPT: All Talk

This is a pretty accurate description. Good job!

over 4 years

Gone After I Left

PROMPT: Time Traveler

This is amazing. You're an awesome writer!

over 4 years

Our Talk

PROMPT: All Talk

over 4 years

Symptoms

PROMPT: All Talk

I feel you.

over 4 years

He, She and It

PROMPT: Quartet

The second one is my favorite!

over 4 years

Emotional bullying: Speak up! Silent Victims!

PROMPT: Op-ed Competition 2016

I think I reviewed this before, and this is a big improvement! Way to go! I'm glad you stood up for yourself, too! It's really important (as you know) to go to someone when you have an issue like that! So glad it worked out for you!

over 4 years

Revolution

PROMPT: Quartet

This is great!

over 4 years

EXCELSIOR

PROMPT: Quartet

This is good! I like that he decided to take control of his future!

over 4 years

“Kendrick Lamar: Is The People's Champion Here To Stay?”

PROMPT: Op-ed Competition 2016

over 4 years

Our Story

FREE WRITING

I would suggest making it 3 mistakes...a three strikes you're out kind of thing. That would make it more intense!

over 4 years

The Jump

PROMPT: All in a Minute

This is a really great piece. You're a great writer!

over 4 years

Silenced

PROMPT: Six-Word Memoir

If you have something to say, say it. I'm sure you're a great writer!

over 4 years

The Girl On the Staircase

PROMPT: Quartet

This is a really great piece. Especially for only 5 minutes. Keep working!

over 4 years

Hues

PROMPT: FACT

This is beautiful.

over 4 years

"Best of Times"

FREE WRITING

This is really powerful. Good job.

over 4 years

Why?

PROMPT: Open Prompt

This is really vivid. It left me feeling a lot of different emotions. You really did a great job capturing it. I don't know whether to tell you that I liked it or to tell you that I'm sorry it happened.

over 4 years

Fragile Men

PROMPT: Op-ed Competition 2016

over 4 years

Truth About Online Writing.

PROMPT: Op-ed Competition 2016

over 4 years

Your Dream

PROMPT: Op-ed Competition 2016

This is a really moving paper. Excellent work!

over 4 years

Emotional bullying: Speak up! Silent Victims!

PROMPT: Op-ed Competition 2016

I love the passion behind your essay. I know what keeping it bottled up can do to someone. Keeping things locked inside effected my mental health in the long run. Was the story resolved? If so, resolve it. Then you can use your closing paragraph to prove your thesis and convince people to stand up for victims. Great cause! Oh, and your thesis is the title, in case you were wondering.

over 4 years

Melt

PROMPT: Season-a-Changing

This is really good.

over 4 years

"A Godly Scorn"

FREE WRITING

This is intense. You're a great writer.

over 4 years

Change

FREE WRITING

This is great!

over 4 years

Alone and very lonely

FREE WRITING

I really like this. Writing is a great way to express emotion, and I think you really captured that! You're an excellent writer.

over 4 years

the girl with skinny jeans and big glasses

PROMPT: Quartet

This is fantastic. Keep up the good work!

over 4 years

Sage's Tale : A WORK IN PROGRESS

FREE WRITING

This is really good. You're a great writer! I love all the details!

over 4 years

Selective Aphasia

PROMPT: 0-9

This is really well written.

over 4 years

Angry

FREE WRITING

You are not only heard.... I'm listening.

over 4 years

Eris

PROMPT: Open Prompt

This is fantastic. Really.

over 4 years

Regrets

PROMPT: Six-Word Memoir

This is a great six word story!

over 4 years

Insecurities

FREE WRITING

This is honestly one of the best things I have ever read. I love the way you capture emotion and describe reality. This is really, really great.

over 4 years

6 word

PROMPT: Six-Word Memoir

This is deep, bro.

over 4 years

Estranged

PROMPT: Six-Word Memoir

This is really great.

over 4 years

The Cry

PROMPT: Open Prompt

It made me feel something.

over 4 years

Emerald City

FREE WRITING

Seriously, this is incredible. You should take some time to broaden this story!

over 4 years

The Good and the Bad;

PROMPT: Friendship Tweet

It's good.

over 4 years

My Love

PROMPT: Six-Word Memoir

over 4 years

Is Prom Worth It in the Long Run?

PROMPT: Op-ed Competition 2016

Try to give a little bit of breathing room for other people to be right. I know it's a persuasive essay, but generalizing is still not good in an argument. It will make a lot of your readers check out rather than change their opinions.

over 4 years