melancholyviolets

United States

formerly sc3n3-b3an
a place to express feelings
not here to fight about politics, just to write

Message from Writer

"Write what should not be forgotten." - Isabel Allende
"Pulvis et umbra sumus (We are but dust and shadows)"- Horace

Peer Reviews

Locker 89

FREE WRITING

My main recommendation would be to work on grammar, while not unreadable, it did have some grammatical errors, mainly with commas and quotations, which made it hard to tell if someone was speaking or if it was narration. Aside from that, this is a really original idea, and I really liked it =)

about 1 year