This is simple and beautiful. What I love most about it is that it can be interpreted to be someone (maybe a parent) encouraging their child as they struggle through the day, or it can be interpreted as an internal...

This is a gorgeous response to the prompt! Personification is probably my favourite literary device because it literally brings a setting to life. 'I Am Storm' is wonderfully imaginative. Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I cannot...

This is a lovely response to the prompt! Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I cannot wait to see more of your work on the site.

This is such a fantastic response to the prompt! Your use of sensory description is fantastic. We taste the "moist air", we feel the "heavy atmosphere", we see "the sunlight, golden and soft". We feel and hear the "squish" of...

This is a very interesting piece! I would love to see it expanded upon. Thank so much for sharing this with us. I cannot wait to see more of your work on the site.

This is a stunning response to the prompt. So eerie. Your description of this neighbourhood is both stifling and empty. The reader gets the impression that you are all alone in the world. I really enjoyed this piece. You have...

This is gorgeous! Thank you so much for sharing it with us. I cannot wait to see more of your work on the site.

This is a such an interesting story! I have to say that I love this prompt. So many writers on this site have such fascinating and diverse family histories. I've loved reading all of them, especially this one. Thank you...

This is such a lovely response to the prompt! Your writing has a strong voice full of personality and wit, and the story flows smoothly from past to present. Your opening line is immediately engaging and the piece thrives when...

This is brilliant. What a fantastic response to the prompt! You have done a lovely job explaining your grandmother's relationship with food and how this has influenced your own relationship with food. Your anecdotes are beautifully written, structured and selected....