avievasive

India

Hi there! I'm 16, and I really, really enjoy writing! Reviews and tips are highly appreciated! Looking forward to make friends, and happy reading! :)

avievasive (India)() liked Weight of Hate by Dragon-Like-Tendencies (United States of America)()

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avievasive (India)() reviewed:

Distance

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The way you have presented 'Distance' as a concept and used the increasing line spacing to visually depict the growing distance blows my mind. You're really creative and this piece shows exactly that. Just beautiful, so beautiful. :)

about 1 month ago

avievasive (India)() reviewed:

Poison

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Pheo, you write so beautifully! Please do continue writing. But do keep in mind the separation of individual clauses with a semi-colon or a period, and break your writing into smaller paragraphs so that the effect is conveyed to the...

about 1 month ago

avievasive (India)() liked Distance by RubyRedDreams (United States of America)()

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avievasive (India)() reviewed:

short

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Mate, you have a gorgeous way of writing and please keep writing more! I found myself wanting more at the end, but the size of this piece is perfect and I honestly wouldn't change anything. Awesome work!

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avievasive (India)() published:

Raveled Winters.

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Do you see the stars brooding overhead?
Because I don't.

You don't look at me, but you break into a smile. I can see the stars in the glossy, flickering reflection of your eyes and we finally share furtive glances. The evening deepens. The mellifluous sounds grow louder than ever.
Can you feel them drumming to the sound of our heartbeats? 

The crisp, crinkled waves of the dewy grass blades are set ablaze by the sheer moonlight. My thoughts have...

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avievasive (India)() liked And the Stars Stopped by Bookworm22 (United States of America)()

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avievasive (India)() liked I am something without teeth by aryelee (United States of America)()

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avievasive (India)() published:

hello winter.

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the bitter cold
stings the tip of your nose,
does it not? 
every gulp of air
is icier than the last.
there's nowhere I'm going;
there's nowhere I have to be.
the strata of my conscious mind
has burned out.
the stars are gone.
the stars adorned
on the walls of my mind
they have been snuffed out.

hello winter. 

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avievasive (India)() liked short by K.L. Rose (Australia)()

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