abi's pov

United States Minor Outlying Islands

WtW's resident disappearing act

a WtW vet

tbh, i forgot exactly when i joined - late 2019

Message from Writer

i'm not a poet

"nothing ever ends poetically. it ends and we turn it into poetry." - kait rokowski

current book rec
-laura dean keeps breaking up with me by Mariko Tamaki

current song rec
-rät by Penelope Scott

stay safe, stay cool, kiddos!

your angsty, pretentious alt wtw older sister :)

Peer Reviews



There are a couple places where grammar could be corrected and formatting for dialogue. As a rule of thumbs, you usually change paragraphs when you change to a new speaker. Here's a helpful article from Ursinus College that guidelines how to write dialogue-(https://www.ursinus.edu/live/files/1158-formatting-dialogue). Don't worry about it though, ngl I struggled to format dialogue and like you said this was "total, unedited randomness" so great job! I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you so much for writing for #pov'sprompts. I might release a couple of my favorites from these prompts and this piece will definitely be on it.

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