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I might suggest so the poem rolls more, make the 5th and 6th verses a bit longer so the syllable count is similar to the other verses. Other than that super good.
about 1 year
PROMPT: My December Competition 2019
Thank you for writing this, it paints a really nice picture of the holidays for you, and I can see the story as well as feel it.
about 1 year
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Clear is a sort of color, because some clear things are colored but a white/ clear thing has no color and is only a piece of something like starlight. Both, each is better in certain situations... Cucumbers, pickles look weird. It all goes into a 2.5 inch binder- organized enough right? Even numbers, they are so friendly- but I do love 5 and 13!
about 1 year