elani@sun4

Sweden

Love Life and writing gives me the feeling of life, the wind, music, touch and love.
I dance,badminton and track in my free time as sport. But write when feeling a set of emotions so follow and give me comments on my stories.it would really help

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If u love writing just as me please read my story and give your opinion. Writing just gives me a set of emotions. When I write, the world around me fades and it's just me and my computer. My heart blossoms and it feels I'm on top of a mountain watching the stars and moon at night. Writing is a space I escape to when I want a clear mind or heart. I love writing just as fantasizing and writing leads me to another world of imagination. Follow me if u feel the same or if u don't please give me your opinions on my stories so I can grow as a writer. thank you, luv u.

elani@sun4 (Sweden) published:

Strong in the face of admirition weak in the face of ego

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His heart beats like a thousand joules coursing through his body. He takes a step forward shaking. His breath coming out heavily. What will he see next he doesn't know. He takes another step and his nervsystem is racking. His sweat rolls down fast as the heat of his sweat running down his face gives him more tension. He heard a angry sound and he moves back but hearing his syster crying. He knew he had to put his strong...

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elani@sun4 (Sweden) published:

Pain

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I touched her cold cheeks and tears ran down my cheek.I broke down crying in front of the gathering, No!...I shouted That corpse is my mother i thought. The woman who carried me in her womb, gave her best effort to born me. Went through Pain and suffer to put food on the table. No my mother, my role model, my saviour, my inspiration. How could u leave me now days before my wedding. You didn't leave to see me...

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Free

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Blue rays shine through the open window, I look out wondering will I ever be free. I'm not gonna wait here for someone to start caring. I want to find a place I belong, a place I call home and truly mean it. A place where people care about each other. That's my dream, to be free in my soul. I close my eyes, charging every path of my body with the warmth piercing through the window. I look out...

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elani@sun4 (Sweden) published:

Connected

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Ding, Ding, Ding...The churches bell echoes in my ear as I sit on the bench listening to the birds chirping. The water dripping as it echoes through eternity. The half moon discovering itself through the clouds. Every step heard from a mile distance, every voice, laughter, move, touch as it leaves our embrace on the earth. The earth root grows as people grow. Sounds echoing through windows to each land. the wind, the Sun, The moon and rain all connecting...

8 months ago

elani@sun4 (Sweden) reviewed:

Forgotten#letsdothis

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I really liked it, when reading it I felt the emotion coursing through the writing and it meant a lot. Good work! I underline some sentence in yellow and those yellow sentence gave me the conclusion I wrote earlier

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