Your descriptive writing is absolutely stunning! Keep it up!
PROMPT: Writing for Children Competition 2020
The parts where I highlighted, were only suggestions so feel free to change your story as you please.
PROMPT: Six-Word Story
Good Job! You've got talent. :)
This is just a nice short concise story about hope, which makes it really nice. Good Job!
Your writing style is amazing!!!! and this is how I would love to write! This piece shows off your talent, so good job! Keep up the good work!
PROMPT: Arctic Dreams
I can't wait to see more of your writing!
This piece was beautifully written and, my, it is stunning and it shows what the author is trying to tell the reader. Keep up the good work!!