JakeFrommStateFarm

United States

here since October 10, 2019
born a boy, and will always be a boy
16 years old
born in good old USA
homeschooled
play guitar
singer/songwriter
love Rock
love Marvel
un hijo de Dios
Southern Baptist
TRUMP TRAIN 2020!!!

Message from Writer

"My paramount object in this struggle is to save the Union, and is not either to save or to destroy slavery."
-Abraham Lincoln, 1862

"It is good that war is so terrible, lest we learn to love it."
-Robert E. Lee

"Love is a madness; if thwarted it develops fast."
-Mark Twain

"The noblest art is that of making others happy."
-P.T. Barnum

"There was never was yet an uninteresting life. Such a thing is an impossibility. Inside of the dullest exterior there is a drama, a comedy, and a tragedy."
-Mark Twain (again)

"Marriage is a man and a woman agreeing to disagree until the day they both die."
-Me

"I'm Baptist born, Baptist bred, and when I die... Baptist dead"
-Me (and probably a lot of other Baptists, too)

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JakeFrommStateFarm (United States) published:

What Could Have Been

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Never think of what could have been,
With you as the victor, instead of him.

To think of all the difference paths
That were almost complete but didn't last

Just hits you in that broken bone
That was snapped so long ago.

The chance you had to be the best,
That leaped over you and went to the next.

But there is still a hope.
There is no need to mope.

So attack the day,
Don't delay.

Seize the moment, take that...

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9 months ago

JakeFrommStateFarm (United States) published:

Tips On Giving Giving Reviews

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    Here are some tips on giving peer reviews on WtW.
    The point of a review is to give the writer advice on how to make a better draft. You want your review to actually help the writer, not just take up his time. So here's necessary tips on giving good peer reviews.

  1. Tell the writer what you DON'T like, and tell them how they can fix it.Too many times I've received reviews that just say "I liked this, I...
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JakeFrommStateFarm (United States) published:

Land of the Free, Home of the Broken...

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    It's been three long years since those... things attacked us.
    It seemed impossible at first. Unbelievable. Like everything was a bad science-fiction movie. But then you wake up the next day, and you quickly realize... it's real. And it's not going away anytime soon.
    It's like a bad hangover. Day. After. Day.
    Three years ago, I felt like I was on top of the world. Things just seemed to be going my...

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9 months ago

JakeFrommStateFarm (United States) liked Christmas Competitions!!!! LAST DAY FOR SUBMISSIONS by Princess Maria (United States)

9 months ago

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JakeFrommStateFarm (United States) published:

A Q&A for You | #JFSFQ&A

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This is a Q&A for @Julia ☆ミ's contest. Be sure to fill in the blanks and use #JFSFQ&A in the title and I'll like your piece!

If you could speak any language, what would it be and why?
French cause it's sexy.

If you could play any instrument, what would it be?
I already play guitar, and I would really like to learn piano.

What is your favorite movie of all time.
Either The Sound of Music or The Greatest...

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JakeFrommStateFarm (United States) liked #JFSFQ&A by tearsandink (United States)

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JakeFrommStateFarm (United States) reviewed:

Weight of Hate

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This is an interesting poem because it talks about of how an overweight person feels he doesn't fit in society. It is full of inner conflict that drives the story. I don't think I've ever seen a poem like this...

9 months ago

JakeFrommStateFarm (United States) liked Ivan Ilych's Death by Princess Maria (United States)

9 months ago

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JakeFrommStateFarm (United States) published:

Take Her Slow

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Love can take a while
It just never goes as fast as you like.
But if you wait and take your time
It'll go better than you ever planned.

So take your time
Hold her slow
You never know
Where the time will go

Might take a year
Might take a life
But it'll be fine
If you hear this line.

Take her slow.
Take her slow.

 

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9 months ago

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JakeFrommStateFarm (United States) published:

Daydreams

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No matter what, I can never keep my mind on what 
I am supposed to be doing.
I like to drift off into some other world
so I can look inside myself.

I look inside and then I see 
all the things I've aspired to be. 
The athlete. The movie star. The
writer. The rockstar. The millionaire.

They bring back memories of 
my carefree childhood.
They show me what I was like
all those years ago.

They lead me down...

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