HelpMe512

United States

Aro(?)/Ace
He/Him
Transphobes stay out
Joined September 2019

"If I wait 'til my tomorrow comes, is the waiting all I've ever done?"
-Ben Platt

Message from Writer

"It's alright, it's okay. You're not a monster just human and you made a few mistakes,"
-It's Alright by Mother Mother

"One page of the bible isn't worth a life,"
-The Village by Wrabel

"A hundred bad days makes a hundred good stories and a hundred good stories makes me interesting at parties,"
-100 Bad Days by AJR

"With shortness of breath, you explained the infinite
How rare and beautiful it is to even exist"
-Saturn by Sleeping At Last.

"But there's a moment when you realize they're not superheroes or villains. They're painfully, unforgivably human. The question is can you forgive them for being human anyway?"
-Dry by Neal Shusterman

Peer Reviews

A Romance Book: He's Here Chapter 1 (Edited)

FREE WRITING

Super good start, and I'd love to read more

6 months

sincerely, a struggling teenager

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2020

Good luck in the competition! I can really see this one placing!

8 months

The Replacement

FREE WRITING

You're really talented, and I really enjoyed reading this!

8 months

Suspicious #myrose ( comment if you want a Part 2)

FREE WRITING

Awesome work!

8 months

Who Defines 'Perfection' in the 21st Century?:#Conficiens

FREE WRITING

I apologize because I'm not used to the essay format, but I tried my best to give feedback. You did a very good job!

8 months

Fire and Ice

FREE WRITING

Great work!

8 months

There's always something | #champion

FREE WRITING

Congrats!

9 months

Primavera | #ekphrasis1

FREE WRITING

Congrats on winnning the contest, and sorry that this is a bit late.

9 months

After You Left Me

PROMPT: After... After... After

This is amazing. Never stop writing.

9 months

Ring Ring

FREE WRITING

Congrats on winning the contest, and sorry this is a little late

9 months

Flos Amoris Chp. 3

FREE WRITING

I really enjoyed this! Nicum is adorable!

9 months

Flos Amoris Chp. 2

FREE WRITING

About that thing in the footnotes about your browser crashing, I'd recommend writing your drafts in google drive, and then copying it to WTW. Google drive autosaves, so that might help you again.

9 months

Flos Amoris Chp. 1

FREE WRITING

Congrats on winning the contest!

9 months

Witches and Ghosts and Drugs and #pb&pig

FREE WRITING

Congrats on winning the contest!

9 months

Spunk | Chapter 2

FREE WRITING

Congrats on winning the contest!

9 months

Radio Broadcasting

FREE WRITING

Congrats on winning the contest!

9 months

Writing Streak Week 2 Day 4

FREE WRITING

I was going to review one of your poems, but I'm not too good at reviewing poetry. I really liked this piece!

11 months

My Hero (please review!)

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2020

Tell your mom thank you for me, and I hope you all stay safe!

11 months

The Cowboy in the Dark and his Horse

PROMPT: In Motion

This was super good, and I enjoyed reading this a lot!

11 months

"i miss my cocoa butter kisses"

FREE WRITING

Nice job! I really enjoyed reading this!

11 months

Combination of part 1 and part 2 of my first book by Mason Wong

FREE WRITING

So sorry if this review seems harsh, I just want your writing to be the best it can be! Please don't hesitate to ask me to explain anything, and I think you have an awesome idea here that can be taken really far.

11 months

Paula and the apple tree chapter 1

FREE WRITING

Apologies for the amount of grammar edits; I'm a little bit of a grammar snob. Although my review might be perceived as harsh, I really did enjoy reading this! I am really looking forward to chapter two!

12 months

wishes that become the stars in the night sky

PROMPT: Star Wish

12 months

somewhere over the rainbow #inbetween

PROMPT: A Fictional Landscape

12 months

The Moon and its Sky | #champion

PROMPT: Lunar Phrases

You did a really great job! Keep writing!

12 months

embroidered with petals | Round Three

FREE WRITING

I honestly couldn't put many comments on this because I think it's just so perfect. Fantasy descriptions are my favorite, so I may be a bit biased, but I really loved this. You're a very talented writer!

12 months

shelter

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

This was amazing! I'm really glad I was given the chance to read it.

12 months

Child of Earth and Wax (#Kickoff!)

FREE WRITING

This was really well written! Awesome job!

about 1 year