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BluMoon

United States

A high school writer looking to improve her writing and get feedback. A fan of fragments and commas,,,

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I post semi-frequently depending on when I get inspiration. I like to include a lot of imagery and sensory detail, so be prepared for that if you give my stuff a read. :P

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over 2 years ago

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BluMoon (United States) reviewed:

Where Are We Going?

PROMPT: Beyond Reason

I love the natural imagery in this series of questions; the wind, the ocean, the earth, the rain. Then it grows to larger questions like the universe, heaven, time, eternity.

over 2 years ago

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BluMoon (United States) published:

Block

FREE WRITING

    The room felt stifling. There wasn't enough green. She couldn't think, she couldn't breathe. She turned away from her desk and her eyes darted around for something, anything, to write about. Her four walls stared mockingly back with their mundane paint. Her half-made bed offered no excitement, and the organized chaos of her closet was more depressing than inspirational. The backpack by the corner of the bed only reminded her of the responsibilities she was avoiding. The chair...

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over 2 years ago

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Stargazing

PROMPT: I Remember

I remember the different colors of stars. I remember the trees spiking up into the sky. I remember the telescopes with lenses as large as my face that could show us the red dot of mars and the rings of Saturn. I remember my mother lamenting that she didn't bring her tripod to take pictures of the sky. I remember feeling sleepy but not wanting to leave. I remember how dark it was on the road, with nothing but our...

over 2 years ago

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BluMoon (United States) published:

Wisdom

FREE WRITING

Never give up a good person to go looking for a perfect one. 

over 2 years ago

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BluMoon (United States) published:

This I Believe

PROMPT: This I Believe

This I believe, that all human beings have the capacity for good. All human beings have something to offer to the world. It is often something small, something many might call insignificant, but it is valuable. 

I believe that the world is subjective. What I believe in is not what others believe in. There are many different vantages from which to view the world, none of which can reveal everything. There is no objective or concrete reality. 

I believe in...

over 2 years ago

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BluMoon (United States) published:

What Color Am I Thinking Of?

PROMPT: Unnamed

It's the one color everyone has in common. It can be brash and loud or soft and comforting. It is always warm. Some call it the color of anger, of passion, of love. They call it roses and velvet, blood and wine. I call it emotion, thorns, and danger. It's far from my comfort zone in nearly every way. But it's his favorite, how could I not grow to love it? 

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almost 3 years ago

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BluMoon (United States) reviewed:

A World Not Quite Born

PROMPT: 1 Photo, 20 Words

Considering that the image is a nebula, the first stage in the life cycle of a star/solar system, I find it interesting that you chose to title this poem what you did. (one of the reasons I clicked it to...

almost 3 years ago