Rewrite_The_Stars

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"The noblest art is that of making others happy"
-P.T. Barnum
"It's okay to fall apart every now and then. Tacos fall apart, and we still love them."
-Random memes
"I try not to think. It interferes with being nuts."
-Leo Valdez

Message from Writer

Dork, Nerd, Bookworm, Historical Fic, Mystery
Future English teacher/Librarian
Writing
Drawing
Piano
Violin
TACO BELL
Star Wars
LOTR/Hobbit
Marvel/DC
Cars
Old/Retro/Vintage stuff

Published Work

The Danger of Alcoholism (Research Paper)

The Danger of Alcoholism
    “Alcoholism is a thief of health, mental sanity, and human dignity,” says Dr. T.P. Chia. Alcohol consumption is associated with a wide range of adverse health and social consequences, both acute and chronic. Alcoholism is a chronic disease that may strike at any age, and while consuming the vile liquid may sound appealing early on, one must consider the consequences. Alcoholism is becoming a dangerous epidemic because it kills people, is bad for their health, and increases violence. 
    To begin with, alcoholism is becoming a dangerous epidemic because it increases violence. When a person is exposed to alcohol and consumes it on a frequent basis, it may impair their ability to act logically. As Bower said, “Male alcoholics who started drinking before 20 are more likely to experience clinical depression, attempt suicide, and spend time in jail for violence.” (“Science News”). Studies show teens have an ever-increasing problem with alcohol, consuming it at younger...

Math

math
rhymes with
meth
both are bad for you and cause
death


have a nice day XD

Exams

exams suck
there's no denying it
just hours
upon
hours
of
torture
with no end

so many study packets
so many review days
so much studying
so much reviewing

so much time stuck sitting
in total silence
uncomfortable
weird
concentrated
silence

i look forward to hand cramps
fingers hurting
and brain aching
 

True Love

true love 

is a

baked

sweet potato

Remorse?

what is remorse

it is when you feel a deep, deep regret
and you don't know what to do

it is when you feel shame for an action
and it's confusing you

i'll give you an example
maybe two

it is when you eat more than you should have at dinner
and your stomach then hates you

it is when you eat more than you should have at that sleepover with your best friend
where you pulled an all-nighter eating goldfish while gazing at the moon

it is the feeling of regretting the goldfish
the extra slice of pizza
the extra row of oreos
all until noon

if is the shame of taking the last oreo and realizing your best friend's brother
never got one, and you feel like a goon

deep, deep regret fills your mind
and you sit on the floor wondering

when can i have more?
 

When I Do The Right Thing

sometimes doing the right thing is hard
it aches, it hurts
as if your heart
was stepped on then burnt

you'll get made fun of
you'll lose a lot of people you thought were your friends
but those are the people that will stab you in the back
with the key to a relationship that ends

you think they care for you
but do they really?
do they want to support you on the right path?
with whatever decision you make, even when weary?

if not, they are not true friends
they say they'll be there no matter what
but really they mean only if it benefits their lives
if they get in on the drama and to stab you in the gut

i am making the right decision
three of my friends have already asked me to stay away
but i can't say they're my friends anymore
you see it took less than a day

i know
it's sad ...

hehe

fruit loops are just gay Cheerios so we should be calling them "Queerios"

thanks for coming to my ted talk

My Bae #Whatislove

i am a girl.

my bae is a girl.

we are in a relationship. 

like a romantic one.

so judge as you might, but i love her.

i love everything about her.

her looks and personality.

her dark chocolate eyes, they sparkle with joy and emotion.

her lips, so soft to the touch.

her character---she's marvelous.

the way she can tell if i'm lying, it's kinda creepy, but she keeps me intact.

the way she turns everything i say into a joke, just to make us both laugh.

the way she smiles, so perfect and beautiful and beyond compare.

the way she is stubborn and never tells me how she can tell i'm lying.

the way she is serious when need be.

most people are under the mindset that every one that is together always has a perfect relationship full of rainbows sparkles and happiness and nothing bad ever happens. she has helped me through the good, the bad, and...

hi, me again

irrelevance shouts my name
insignificance calls my title
sadness whispers in my ear
loneliness holds on tight and won't let go
anger tugs on my arm
jealously waves from behind the tree
fear taps on my shoulder fervently
annoyance jumps up and down beside me
grief holds my hand, clinging tightly
abandonment walks silently beside me
but it's presence is still felt
confusion hovers over my head



 

Tears

tears
crying
sadness
frustration
happiness
joy
surprise
embarrassment

these are all things you can cry from.

at least i do.

i cry very easily.

it's not okay.

tears flow freely.

i cry a lot.

maybe it means i'm sad a lot?

sadness comes when i can't do something, won't see someone, or something like that for a long time

frustration comes when i can't sock someone for being mean to others.

happiness comes when i see my best friends after 6 months of not seeing them face-to-face

joy comes when i'm excited to do something or go somewhere

surprise comes when your best friend whom you haven't seen in six months comes to the same taco bell you're eating at just to see you.

embarrassment comes when they call you names that you don't deserve every day. names that offend and make you feel weird.



~oof~


 

Lines From My Fav Songs And What They Mean To Me

"No you don't know what its like
When nothing feels alright
You don't know what its like to be like me
To be hurt, to feel lost
To be left out in the dark
To be kicked when you're down
To feel like you've been pushed around
To be on the edge of breaking down
And no one there to save you
No you don't know what its like
Welcome to my life"

-Welcome To My Life ~Simple Plan~~

Sometimes life gets you down...the only problem is that my life seems to always be down lately. This song I identify with because I can't talk to my family about anything, I can't say anything without offending everyone in freaking existence, and bullies are striking. Go listen.

"Sometimes I wish I could save you,
And there's so many things that I want you to know
I won't give up 'til it's over
If it takes you forever, I want you to...

i don't know...

i don't know 
what to do
when you make fun of me
i don't understand you

thinking that you can
walk all over me
just like that
why can't you see

it hurts me
i feel emotion
it's sad
because you feel that notion

to make fun of me
and call me names
my courage is drowning
in a pit of insulting flames

it hurts
so much
everyone can see
i flinch at everyone's touch

it's scaring my family
my friends see it
so why not lay off
let me relax for a moment

i don't know
what to do anymore
i'm scaring myself
i'm ready to walk out the door

but i'm too much of a coward
that's why you pick on me
isn't it
i'm too vulnerable to just let be

i'm new
you don't know me
my struggles
it makes it easier to kill my sanity

you have no clue how much
you are hurting me
and...

Listen Up Kids

so everyone needs to go follow SoulStone

i am conducting an experiment

she also needs more people to read her amazing pieces

go

now

or i will find you

i know where you sleep

I Need You

if you're asking if i need you,
my answer is forever.
if you're asking if i will leave,
my answer is never.
if you're asking what i value,
the answer is you.
if you're asking if i love you,
the answer is i do.

Your View

Come At Me

1. Getting dirty is fun. From riding quads out in the mud to playing out in nature climbing trees, buring random items, whatever i can do. Also, I love wrenching on stuff. Fixing stuff up. Boats, airplanes, cars, trailers, you name it, I'll fix it. You may be thinking what the freak man you're 13! Whelp here's my response: I'm almost 14 so come at me.

2. Being bisexual does not change who I am. Some people think that because I am also into girls means that I'm a bad person or it makes me weird. How I identify does not change my quirky personality. cAlM dOwN

3. People spend entirely too much time on their phones. True, when I can, I spend hours talking to friends. BUT I have an excuse. I don't have a phone, I talk to my friends once per month at best, and I live in SC, they live in PA. Other people just sending...

What Do I Do?

i don't understand
what you want me to do
what you want me to say
what you're going through

i can't say i understand
what has happened 
to you in the past
the tension has not lessened

but i go through stuff too
that's what you don't get
and i don't want to argue
i never pictured this when we met

i'm human
i get sad
i feel emotion
i'm sorry if you think that's bad

so what do i do
when you just don't understand
all i can say 
is that this wasn't planned

nothing tragic is ever planned
but you can try and put yourself in my shoes
try to understand that i'm frustrated
whether you do or not, that's for you to choose.

A Friend

i have a friend
who i just met
a couple weeks ago
not by coincidence, i'll bet

he's so sweet
he's so kind
he's so generous
it's tearing up my mind

i want to meet him
i want to see him
but how?
the chances are very dim

so i'm expressing
my innermost gratitude
with a poem
that i should really try to conclude

so in conslusion
thank you 
for being so caring and nice
and know my words are true

 

Depression

i have depression now

i accidentally left my earbuds at home so now i can't drown out the world with my music

my only friend in my class is absent today

once again i stress i DoN't hAvE mY eArBuDs AnD dEpReSsIOn iS hiTtiNg HARD

Take A Breath

"Take A Breath, and I pull myself together. Just another step, until I reach the door. You'll never know the way it tears me up to see you. I wish that I could tell you something, to take it all away. Sometimes I wish i could save you. And there's so many things that I want you to know. I won't give up till it's over. if it takes you forever I want you to know"



take a breath
as it said above
be more calm, understanding
being there for others will fit you like a glove

take a breath
as it said above
be more understanding, empathetic
knowing what it's like you'll get sick of

take a breath
as it said above
be more empathetic, trusting
sharing and opening up brings trust and love

take a breath
as it said above
be more trusting, caring
you will be a better person thereof

take a breath
as it said above ...

I Will Always Choose You

you have your doubts
i understand
but trust builds over time
that's what makes it grand

i'm over her
you don't have to worry
don't rush to conclusions
and run away in a scurry

it's true, feelings take time to go away
but once they're gone
it's so much easier 
you're the only one

i really like you
so please trust me
i trust you with all my heart
this is my plea

i haven't told her yet
it's too soon
i don't know how she'll take it
oof, mistake, i'm a freaking baffoon

we'll work towards total trust
and soon we'll earn each other's
i have faith in us
we will show ourselves as well as others

because when it comes to me choosing
between anyone else in this world and you
i will always, always
i will always choose you


 

just because i can

i don't knock on death's door

i ring the doorbell and then run away. 

he hates that.

I Am Sick Of It

i am sick of it
i am sick of people
asking if i'm okay
if something happened

no, i'm not okay
i sound depressed
so i am depressed
simple as that

just quit caring
i have stopped caring
stop caring about me
stop pretending to care

i know some of you care
calm down
but the majority
just want something to gossip about

i'm crying in a corner
leave me alone
i have my struggles
life is just that way

go bother someone
who wants
all that 
negative attention

and pity
and sorry feelings
and simpathy
i don't want that

not from you
not from your friends
not from your parents
just learn how to genuinely care

 

GUESS WHAAAAAAAAT

IT"S ALMOST HALLOWEEN

IT"S ALMOST HALLOWEEN

IT"S

ALMOST 

HALLOWEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEN!!!!!!!!!!




So you guys may be wondering why I'm so ecstatic about this. Whelp. I am here to tell you that I was homeschooled until 5th grade, then put into public school for 5th grade and am still in public school. My mom homeschooled my brothers and I because my family is a Christian family and they wanted to keep us pure as long as possible. ANYWAYS, being Christian, my mom and dad believe that Halloween is basically celebrating the devil or all of the evil in this world or something, so they have never let me or my brothers go trick-or-treating. 

WELL GUESS WHAT

This year, my parents are both out of town, so I'm currently staying with my aunt. SHE"S TAKING US TRICK OR TREATING. 

AND I"M DRESSING UP. You could take my costume two different ways, it's literally almost the same thing.

1. Celaena Sardothien from the Throne of...

Eye Contact

Eyes
Eyelashes
Eyelids
Pupils
Colour

Eyes can be a window to the soul
They show your emotion
Your wants
Your intention

Eyes can be a mirror into your soul
They show your needs
Your desires
Show your inside until it bleeds

Eyes can tell you about a person
Sharp
Cold
Happy
Sad
You get a lot from a person's eyes

The woman at the reception desk
Her eyes are sharp
She pays attention
To every little detail, every little mark

The child that lives next door to you
His eyes are happy
Glowing with childish joy
And never going to be unhappy

The girl that doesn't talk to anyone
She thinks she has no one
Her eyes are sad
But her life has only begun

The boy that is always tired
Sleepy eyes he has
He stays up all night studying
Trying to do his best whereas

Then there's your eyes
Are they happy
Are they sad
Are they sharp ...

Teacher Gratitude

My Inspiration

    "Children are likely to live up to what you believe of them." -Lady Bird Johnson

        In seventh grade, I had one of the most amazing ELA teachers in the world. Her name is Dana Cox (Mrs. Cox to students), but my friends and I called her Mrs. C. She is one of the most amazing people I know, and she has inspired me so much. I am currently in 8th grade and striving to be an English teacher like her. There are so many things I could say about Mrs. C, but I'll have to keep this somewhat short. As you guys know, I love to write, so I can't guarantee a "short story". 
        On the first day of seventh grade, I was running around my school trying to locate the teachers' rooms. Some teachers had switched rooms, so everyone was confused. When I finally found Mrs. C's room, I was relieved to see...

poptart

there's this magical substance
called a pop tart
i just ate one for the first time last week
it was pumpkin spice
this morning 
i am eating a smores one
it has been going
for like an hour
so yeah
i now like pop tarts
they are majestic
and tasty
especially the pumpkin spice

This Kind Of Love

There's this kind of love
that goes deeper than any explanation
could ever resolve
it has much representation

you put your arm
tight around me
never let go
you must see

i love you so much
don't let me go
you're my last grip on this world
i love you so

we hang out
we laugh, we cry
we act silly
that's why

i'm so happy to have you
one of my best friends
i don't know what i'd do without you
but i hope this one never ends

you brought me 
back to life
you saved me
from my strife

i love you so much
don't let me go
you're my last grip on this world
i love you so

This Kind Of Love

There's this kind of love
that goes deeper than any explanation
could ever resolve
it has much representation

you put your arm
tight around me
never let go
you must see

i love you so much
don't let me go
you're my last grip on this world
i love you so

we hang out
we laugh, we cry
we act silly
that's why

i'm so happy to have you
one of my best friends
i don't know what i'd do without you
but i hope this one never ends

you brought me 
back to life
you saved me
from my strife

i love you so much
don't let me go
you're my last grip on this world
i love you so

12:01

at the end of the day
when i'm lying in bed
i can't get these voices 
out of my head
all i want
is a moment of peace
my brain is
breaking
my heart is 
cracking
my body is
aching
from the constant
screaming of the
nightmares i have
every time i close my eyes
and if i wake up
i realize it was
me
the whole time
 

Q

do you ever feel sad
like nothing could get better
like you just can't anymore
just want to not exist?

like that tumbleweed
that keeps going
and going
and going
and
going

and


going




until it stops somewhere
and flourishes
or is torn apart 
and can't be put back together

until it finds a place to stay
where it belongs
or is forever going
never finding refuge

until it is accepted
and loved
or it is disregarded
forever alone

i'm the tumbleweed
that was torn apart
that can't be put back together
that is forever going
that will never find refuge
that is always disregarded
and will be forever alone

Six-Word Story

Truth

These stories are all six words

Even the one that's up there.

And this one. And so forth>>

------------------------------------

Airpods don't make you rich.

MCR is a really good band.

-----------------------------------

Here's the lies I tell myself:

Just one more episode...then bed

Just one more chapter...then productivity.

Just one more piece of pizza.

Just one more hour with her.

----------------------------------------

Okay, what the heck just happened?!

Hey, what's goin' on? WELL OKAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYy

Waking up sucks. Go back asleep.

haha you think I'm smart *snort*









 

i know because

"out of the 7 billion people baby you're the only one."
-Numbers, The Cab

you're the one
that i've waited for
i didn't know it before
but it was always you

i know because 
we were together for such a short time
but when we broke apart
it hurt more than any other

i know because
your presence lights up my day
makes me happy
no matter the situation

i know because
we clicked
we get along so well
we feel similar emotions

i know because
i felt a connection to you
like i could help you
we could get through this together

so let me help you
let me stay at your side
give me another chance
to make you feel loved

i know because
 

Six-Word Story

Truth

Airpods don't make you rich.

MCR is a really good band.

Here's the lies I tell myself:

Just one more episode...then bed

Just one more chapter...then productivity.

Just one more piece of pizza.

Just one more hour with her.

 

Joining #honeyourpotter

Greetings! My name is Elise, and I am a true potterhead. I have read the series three times and own three of the books. My two favourite characters are Harry and Draco, my favourite book is The Goblet of Fire, and I am a Slytherpuff. My pure house is Hufflepuff, but Pottermore won't make up it's mind between Slytherin and Hufflepuff. I have gotten Hufflepuff more than Slytherin, but they almost tied. My favourite quote is from The Sorcerer's Stone-"There are some things you can't share without ending up liking each other, and knocking out a twelve-foot mountain troll is one of them."
I greatly look forward to everything we might do!

#thingsihate

well...this was inspired by Pineapples. um imma just start now...

first off

people who hate reading/books/reading books
i love books, and just because i do doesn't mean that i freaking worship them. when you're put into the nerd category in middle school, you're stuck there. not known for any other talents, just the maniac who loves books, musicals, and is really smart. i don't mind being put there, but stereotypes are to blame for the situation i'm put in.

people who are mean to books
unless you own the book you are abusing, do not touch it if your hands are not washed or you have any other intention besides chilling with a cup of coffee and reading the book. it is not kindling for a fire. it is not a cutting board. it is not a paper towel to wipe up whatever shtuff you just spilled on or around it. just respect the book.

homophobics
being bi-sexual, i am...

#thingsihate

well...this was inspired by Pineapples. um imma just start now...

first off

people who hate reading/books/reading books
i love books, and just because i do doesn't mean that i freaking worship them. when you're put into the nerd category in middle school, you're stuck there. not known for any other talents, just the maniac who loves books, musicals, and is really smart. i don't mind being put there, but stereotypes are to blame for the situation i'm put in.

people who are mean to books
unless you own the book you are abusing, do not touch it if your hands are not washed or you have any other intention besides chilling with a cup of coffee and reading the book. it is not kindling for a fire. it is not a cutting board. it is not a paper towel to wipe up whatever shtuff you just spilled on or around it. just respect the book.

homophobics
being bi-sexual, i am...

#thingsihate

well...this was inspired by Pineapples. um imma just start now...

first off

people who hate reading/books/reading books
i love books, and just because i do doesn't mean that i freaking worship them. when you're put into the nerd category in middle school, you're stuck there. not known for any other talents, just the maniac who loves books, musicals, and is really smart. i don't mind being put there, but stereotypes are to blame for the situation i'm put in.

people who are mean to books
unless you own the book you are abusing, do not touch it if your hands are not washed or you have any other intention besides chilling with a cup of coffee and reading the book. it is not kindling for a fire. it is not a cutting board. it is not a paper towel to wipe up whatever shtuff you just spilled on or around it. just respect the book.

homophobics
being bi-sexual, i am...

I Will Be Strong

I will be strong
When the odds are against  me
When all is wrong

When the world puts me down
I get back up again
You won't see me frown

I'll come at you with a smile
Bright and happy
Though it may take a while

Give me a few days
Everything will change
There are a million ways

I can move on
Or stay where I am
Though it's so boring to be normal *yawn*

I will let all my friends in
Push the bullies out
I will be stronger than I've ever been

You will help me
That's what makes me happy
We can do it, you and me

They may make fun of me
They may be rude
But we've got each other, our friendship burns third degree

Because of that,
I will be strong
'Cause I won't let them beat me flat.


 

ha! yeah right

~blank~

~embellished~

~full~

~empty~

~yes~

~no~

~light~

~dark~

~hot~

~cold~


what do these things have in common? 
they are antonyms
they are made to demonstrate opposites
they are made to show us not everything matches up

they are made for when we think
that life is simple
it's a smooth roller coaster
ha! yeah right

life has it's bumps

~fear~

~courage~

~love~

~hate~

~admiring~

~jealous~

it's just as Yoda once said

"Fear leads to anger, anger leads to hate, and hate...leads to suffering"

don't give into the hate. 
don't fall captive of the dark side.
there are people that actually need you
alive and well

they love you
they would die for you
they would stand up for you
they will stay by you

so when you feel down
look up at the sky
look at all of those negative emotions dead in the eye, and say
ha! yeah right

 

On A Positive Note

On a positive note
I have many friends
My many friends love me
I love my many friends

On a positive note 
I'm not clinically depressed
I just feel sad
My heart will heal

On a positive note
I can still talk to my old friends
They may be far away
But thank God for cellular devices

On a positive note
Not as many people hate me here
I'm not noticed as much by people
I see that as a plus

On a positive note

On a positive note

That's the key
Think of the positive
When the negative threatens to take over.

Sunsets

i love sunsets
it's my favourite time of the day
calm and beautiful

sunsets calm me
they set my mind at ease
so many colours

sunsets are romantic
i'm a hopeless romantic
we go hand in hand

sunsets are artistic
i love to draw them
colour them

all of the colours clashing
like a roman and a greek
in a war

it just makes sense for them to be there
the world makes sense
we need more of that

You Will Be Found

I know this is not mine, but this song really encourages me.

Have you ever felt like nobody was there?
Have you ever felt forgotten in the middle of nowhere?
Have you ever felt like you could disappear?
Like you could fall, and no one would hear?

Well, let that lonely feeling wash away
Maybe there's a reason to believe you'll be okay
'Cause when you don't feel strong enough to stand
You can reach, reach out your hand

And oh, someone will coming running
And I know, they'll take you home
Even when the dark comes crashing through
When you need a friend to carry you
And when you're broken on the ground
You will be found


So let the sun come streaming in
'Cause you'll reach up and you'll rise again
Lift your head and look around
You will be found
You will be found
You will be found
You will be found
You will be found

There's...

Broken Love

I saved my love
Just for you 
But you didn't want that
What am I to do

You still want to be best friends
I'm okay with that
But what am I to do 
Where does that put us at?

We'll still be best friends
Doing the idiot stuff we do 
But remember every night before I fall into slumber
I shall still think of you

You just want to be friends
It's too depressing
But just don't fall any farther from me
I am begging

Stay close to me
We may be just friends
But losing your friendship in general
It would cause life that ends

I love you
But I never told you that
You weren't ready 
You didn't know where we were at

I'll still steal your hoodies
Still occasionally hold your hand
Because normal friends do that
You must understand

I respect your decision
And your reasons why
But you don't understand
You have caused another...

From Far Away

There's these people 
from far away
They travel all over 
but they're here to stay
It may just be
for a day
But still, they're here
from far away

 

ANNOUNCEMENT::

Dear fellow writers,

    I plan to write two to three poems, with occasional stories, per day. I have old pieces I would very much love to share with you, and new ideas in my head that I want to put into words so bad! Please provide feedback to my pieces, as I would like to know if you want more of a certain type of story. Right now, I am looking for ideas for a fantasy/medieval times story. I know we already get a lot of fantasy, us who love to read, but I would love to try to write my own official story. 
Thank you all so much!

Yours truly,
           Rewrite_The_Stars 

Six-Word Story

Truth

Airpods don't make you rich.

Love Wins

People used to respect love
It used to be a real thing
But today people disrespect it
Ignoring the joy true love does bring.

They have one another
For maybe a week or two 
Then it’s time to move on
Just something to do.

They say I love you
But really it’s all a lie
They don’t know what they’re saying
They’re just causing their feelings to die.

When you find true love
You’re unsure of your feelings
You don’t know what it truly feels like
To have someone that helps you to start healing.

It may be against your beliefs
But it’s love
We can’t change that
It was set in stone from above.

Love wins every time
That may sound like it’s from a fairy tale
But it’s true 
Love wins, in health or in ail.