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Wolyypuppy

United States

I`m a high school graduate and I`ve been thinking about going to collage to be an author. I got this site from one of my favorite teachers, Mrs.Foreman. I`m just trying to see if writing is the right place for me.

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Tell me if something is wrong with my writing. I can take it and it`ll only make my writing better. I just need to know what to fix before I can fix it

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Wolyypuppy (United States) published:

Future Freedom

PROMPT: Historical Fiction Competition 2016

             This is the hardest thing to do for most of the people in this small group. I know they're tired and hungry but we can't stop. If we stop, people could die, and no one has ever died on one of my trips. I can't let anyone die.
            “Continue or turn back. If we stop we could risk everything and the police will not hesitate to kill every last one of us. Now if you want freedom we must keep...

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Wolyypuppy (United States) published:

Future Freedom

PROMPT: Historical Fiction Competition 2016

             This is the hardest thing to do for most of the people in this small group. I know they're tired and hungry but we can't stop. If we stop people could die and no one has ever died on one of my trips. I can't let anyone die.
            “Continue or turn back. If we stop we could risk everything and the police will not hesitate to kill every last one of us. Now if you want freedom we must keep...
Seeking Peer Reviews

almost 3 years ago

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Wolyypuppy (United States) published:

Future Freedom

PROMPT: Historical Fiction Competition 2016

             This is the hardest thing to do for most of the people in this small group. I know they're tired and hungry but we can't stop. If we stop people could die and no one has ever died on one of my trips. I can't let anyone die.
            “Continue or turn back. If we stop we could risk everything and the police will not hesitate to kill every last one of us. Now if you want freedom we must keep...
Seeking Peer Reviews

almost 3 years ago

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Wolyypuppy (United States) published:

Character Analysis/ Character need to knows

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  • Name
  • Age
  • Birthplace
  • Job or school
  • Secrets
  • Favorite time of day
  • Who they trust
  • Collections
  • Last nightmare
  • First thing they think about in the morning
  • Fascinations
  • Embarrassments
  • Birthday celebrations
  • Last book they read
  • Favorite weather
  • Best habit
  • Worst habit
  • Earliest memory
  • Voice when speaking
  • Day structure
  • What does health mean to them?
  • What does god mean to them?
  • Home description
  • What makes them blush?
  • How old are they mentally?
  • Past/ present relationships?  How did they affect them?
  • Happy childhood?
  • Obsessions?
  • ...
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almost 3 years ago

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Wolyypuppy (United States) published:

Alternate Ending #4

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(Right after chapter 14)
         My chest took a long time to start healing but the doctors were amazed that I had even started to recover at all. Most people who were shot as close to the heart as I was died. I was one of the lucky ten percent that lived through it.
       When I was finally allowed to walk William was right at my side. It took a few weeks for me to be strong enough to stand on...

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Wolyypuppy (United States) published:

Alternate Ending #3

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(Right after chapter 14)
         My chest took a long time to start healing but the doctors were amazed that I had even started to recover at all. Most people who were shot as close to the heart as I was died. I was one of the lucky ten percent that lived through it.
       When I was finally allowed to walk William was right at my side. It took a few weeks for me to be strong enough to stand on...

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almost 3 years ago

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Wolyypuppy (United States) published:

Alternate Ending #2

PROMPT: Open Prompt

Chapter 12:Hit
       He had a minute or let's say it was me who had a minute. That’s when Brian had a different plan. He untied me with a grin after putting a shock collar around my skinny neck. He felt up my boney sides then pushed me forward. He laughed when I fell.
    “Oh look your hero is here just a little bit too late” he chuckled as the timer went off. That's when we heard the door open and...
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almost 3 years ago

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Wolyypuppy (United States) published:

Stolen Heart Alternate Ending #1

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(Right after chapter 2)
      I waited for hours for the doctors to talk to me about William and when they finally came out they didn't look happy. Their faces were blank and I knew something horrible just happened.
    “Mrs.Lively….We are sad to inform you that William has passed away. Him and his girlfriend died on the way to the hospital. We tried so hard but we couldn’t save either of them. I'm so sorry for your lost,” the doctor said...

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