Milzy

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Milzy (Australia) published:

An Extant Ghost

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Part 1
They can’t hear me.
Or see me.
Trust me I’ve tried. I started with the waving, then the shouting and I even tried the shaking; nevertheless, they can’t feel me either. Mostly because of the fact I can’t touch them. Well, at least not physically. The first time I did the shaking, Father wasn’t happy.
It was on a summer’s eve. I remember because the sun was still bleeding late into the night. The sky was soaked with...
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Milzy (Australia) published:

An Extant Ghost

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Part 1 - Burning Dead

They can’t hear me.
Or see me.
Trust me I’ve tried. I started with the waving. Then the shouting. I even tried the shaking; nevertheless, they can’t feel me. Mostly because of the fact I can’t touch them. Well, at least not physically. The first time I did the shaking, Father wasn’t happy.
It was on a summer’s eve. I remember because the sun was still bleeding late into the night. The sky was soaked...
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Milzy (Australia) published:

Forget Me Never

PROMPT: Human Connections Essay Competition 2019

It’s 9pm and I’m sitting next to him watching the cars go by. The stars are bright, and I feel like I could fall at any second. My heart is cautious and I’m thinking “Well, what the hell do I do now?”. My stupid mind is running as fast as the cars streaming past and…well, that’s just about all that I remember. Looking back, I wish I’d just taken a breath and felt the moment.
You see, I have this...

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Milzy (Australia) reviewed:

Life: Chore, Routine, Trap.

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You did awesome! Do you mind taking a read of my story Forget Me Never? I would love some feedback : )

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Milzy (Australia) reviewed:

The House Across The Street.

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Great Story I loved it! Would you mind giving my story Forget Me Not some peer review. I would be very grateful

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