MostlyBananas

United Kingdom

I'm a fan of strange stuff, fantasy, poetry and art, along with a ridiculous combination of music tastes and books. I don't really have a goal, I just love writing. I used to be here under the name Chips but that was years ago. I'm here now.

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Please critique in any way you like, I'm open to it all.

MostlyBananas (United Kingdom) liked someone will call me by the name of a monster by Cosmogyral (United States)

9 days ago

MostlyBananas (United Kingdom) liked The Inanimate by Sophiascb (United States)

9 days ago

MostlyBananas (United Kingdom) liked eternal golden hour by spectral (United States)

9 days ago

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MostlyBananas (United Kingdom) published:

microtime

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Soul lights beamed down at the polished marble slabs--the time stations pristine look reflected the hopes of it’s tenants. A young boy clasped his bag to his chest and breathed slowly, in time with the portals. His eyes were hooked to a small poster, visualising the when and where. Mud smeared men in black overalls swished past with a smorgasbord of tools as portly men in khaki men bartered at stalls for valuables before whipping off with them like magpies...

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9 days ago

MostlyBananas (United Kingdom) published:

not particularly good

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I sometimes feel numb
unplugged and absent of sense
to simply scroll by
words far sharper than mine
with a thrown out mumble
or a simple, meaningless "yeah"

I seem to have forgotten
every crafted image
and spirit cavern in my head
no amount of thought
can bring them home
recesses of my brain
forever hiding my clever words.

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11 days ago

MostlyBananas (United Kingdom) published:

nothing v.2

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my words mean nothing
and my letters convey no meaning
i have an urge to rhyme
but never find the right thing
inky seizures give me
enough fuel for a day
but soon enough-

my brain doesn't work
and my artistic sense is nil
but i can't stop typing
till i have nothing left to spill

13 days ago

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MostlyBananas (United Kingdom) published:

nothing

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my words mean nothing
and my letter convey no meaning
i have an urge to rhyme
but never find the right thing
without a pen i can't write
and without a voice i can't sing
my brain doesn't work
and my artistic sense is nil
but i can't stop typing
till i have nothing left to spill
 

24 days ago

MostlyBananas (United Kingdom) published:

spurnedword

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Rejected
At the Craftsman's door
Spurned and resented
by my own words
And left longing loosely for the days of yore
lonely, confused and unsure
a simple truth so hard to say:
but
I don't know how to write
poetry anymore

26 days ago

MostlyBananas (United Kingdom) liked God is a Dreamer and a Killer by Yellow Sweater (United States)

28 days ago

MostlyBananas (United Kingdom) liked Questions by DreamCatcher468 (United States)

28 days ago