Ariana G

United States of America

Just a gal who expresses her feelings through written words.

(And, on occasion, successfully through speaking.)

I'm a music addict & most people can find me ranting about character and character types to a victim about MCU and etc.

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I'm here to improve! Feel free to review and critique my work. There are many things I need to work on and this is the best place to get advice and suggestions on my work from a purely professional point of view. Thanks!

Ariana G (United States of America)() published:

Memories and Feelings in December

PROMPT: My December Competition 2019

    In my imagination, I can see light flurries of snow falling to the ground into soft white banks, making the land look like an enormous marshmallow. I can imagine the cold biting my cheeks and my nose, and the clear sky above my head. I can imagine ice cream in the fridge and hot chocolate powder in the cabinet. I can imagine school out and the kids in my neighborhood coming out to play, together for once.   

    I can imagine shivering in my...

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Legacy Trajectory

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

This excerpt was very good. I normally don't read sci-fi, but this piqued my interest. Thank you or reviewing my story, by the way! I love rooting for the underdog and I definitely love stories where humans are the bad...

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Ariana G (United States of America)() published:

Runaway Road Trip

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

 
    He squints his eyes, trying to see beyond the bright light of the van’s headlights. He glances to the side to see his sister passed out, her head gently sliding against the window. He turns back to the road, fighting off the yawn threatening to envelop him. Buildings around them soon begin to thin out, with one showing up every 20 miles.   

     When his eyes start to blur, he wills himself to keep going, to add distance between them....

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Ariana G (United States of America)() published:

Icarus Falls: A Musically Diverse Album

PROMPT: Album Review Competition 2019

Zayn Malik's second album, Icarus Falls, takes the listeners on a musical journey. The album has 27 tracks and is divided into two stages. The term "Icarus Falls" refers to the mythology of a young man named Icarus. He and his father escape their trappings by making wings out of wax and feathers. Icarus forgets his father warnings and flies higher to the sun which causes his wax to melt and him to fall into the ocean.

The first part...

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Ariana G (United States of America)() published:

Common Music

PROMPT: Universal Knowledge

Instruments playing in the background and a smooth voice front and center with a bass introducing a beat that everyone knows in their heart. 

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