Sarah Ferguson

United States of America

Sarah Ferguson (United States of America)() reviewed:

shimmering | #LightShadow

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Did you mean for everything to be in lowercase? If so, what is the meaning behind it? Good job!

3 months ago

Sarah Ferguson (United States of America)() published:

Chocolate Cake (incomplete)

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The year is 3019 and I chose to write another entry because something major has happened. In my country we have one leader and a council that make the rules. The leader has no actual power and only has the ability to do whatever he or she chooses. The real power belongs to the Council, they make the rules and employ a "leader" to force new reforms through. The leader is only there to try and distract from the fact...

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4 months ago

Sarah Ferguson (United States of America)() published:

What December Is To Me

PROMPT: My December Competition 2019

 Driving down the street, sitting in a car full of kids who radiate anticipation and excitement, we make our way across town to visit family. Tiny lights of many different colors illuminate the streets and cars that surround us. These lights instantly strike joy into the hearts of the children in the car and easily become their favorite part of this special occasion. Those lights that, on their own, envelop the very image of the season. Time passes by as...

4 months ago

Sarah Ferguson (United States of America)() published:

Fear

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On the other side of the wall lies a mysterious figure whose only wish is to bring me misfortune. A tall foreboding thing that arrives at full speed in front of me. With it evading my every attack I'm left helpless. My only chance is to try and overcome it by power of will. My head spins as I think of the power that I have over it. With a shaky breath I make up my mind of what I...

4 months ago

Sarah Ferguson (United States of America)() reviewed:

The Briny and Melancholic all in one

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I really liked it. Good job!

4 months ago

Sarah Ferguson (United States of America)() reviewed:

focus on what's in front of you

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Were the mistakes in grammar purposeful? If not, that is the only thing that I have to comment on.

4 months ago

Sarah Ferguson (United States of America)() published:

The End Chapter of a Humanoid's Life (rough draft)

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Pain stricken and lying on the floor, Avril is overcome by convulsions. Blood and mechanical liquids spill out of a horrific gash in her side. Her head is clouded with thoughts of worry, for herself and those that made it over the safe point. Head spinning, she feels as if she is falling into an icy abyss. She’s alone and falling, flying, spinning into an unknown abyss. Everything that she had done so far was to protect those that came...

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4 months ago

Sarah Ferguson (United States of America)() reviewed:

life is a game

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Nothing I can think of. Nice job!

4 months ago

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Sarah Ferguson (United States of America)() published:

Busy Bird

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The busy bird flew through the sky searching for a place to land. Her helpful demeanor was the only thing keeping her afloat. Hours and hours went by till she found a resting place. A place where she could lay her sleepy head and enjoy the break that she very much deserved.

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5 months ago

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Sarah Ferguson (United States of America)() published:

Fear

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On the other side of the wall lies a mysterious figure whose only wish is to bring me misfortune. A tall foreboding thing that arrives at full speed in front of me. With it evading my very attack I'm left helpless. My only chance is to try and overcome it by power of will. My head spins as I think of the power that I have over it. With a shaky breath I make up my mind of what I...

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5 months ago