Jessica Garcia

United States of America

Jessica Garcia (United States of America)() published:

Cherry on Top

PROMPT: My December Competition 2019

    December is the last month of the year, the cherry on top of an ice cream sundae. It's what tops the whole year off. You're almost through the year, so lift your head up and keep going. Take some time to relax as school ends. Celebrate Christmas, celebrate Hanukkah, celebrate Kwanzaa, and if you don't celebrate any of those holidays, or any others, celebrate you. The year may have been difficult, filled with traumas and problems, or maybe it...

about 2 months ago

Jessica Garcia (United States of America)() reviewed:

The Red Fence: part I

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I understand this is only the first part, but I would add something else to make it a little more interesting, so the reader would like to keep reading.

about 2 months ago

Jessica Garcia (United States of America)() reviewed:

The Luggage Man

PROMPT: My December Competition 2019

Really good story, I hope to see more like it!

about 2 months ago

Jessica Garcia (United States of America)() reviewed:

Voice of Change

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I really love this piece and I love how you have them reach out to each other and how you show that they understand one another even if they don't know each other.

about 2 months ago

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Jessica Garcia (United States of America)() published:

The Man at the Window (Draft 1)

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Summer 2018

    "Mom, I'm home!" I yelled, not sure if she was home or not... she's not. Ugh, why is it so hot in here? They still haven't fixed the AC I guess. I spent the rest of my day texting my friends and cleaning the house. I decided to call my mom and see where she was... straight to voicemail. It  was getting late so I went upstairs to my room. I plunged onto my bed and...

2 months ago

Jessica Garcia (United States of America)() reviewed:

Brick House (until I find something else to title it)

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This is a really good story, I love the way it plays out and the plot twist. It really makes the reader want to keep reading.

2 months ago

Jessica Garcia (United States of America)() liked Brick House (until I find something else to title it) by tearsandink (United States of America)()

2 months ago

Jessica Garcia (United States of America)() reviewed:

Alive

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

This is a really good piece! Keep at it.

2 months ago

Jessica Garcia (United States of America)() reviewed:

"The City Of Broken Hearts"

FREE WRITING

I really like this piece. The way you built up to the last moment was really cool. Capturing the readers attention in a short story is incredibly hard, but you made it work.

3 months ago

Jessica Garcia (United States of America)() published:

The Robber (Chapter 1) (Draft)

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    David has been robbing houses for years. Almost to the point where it feels like he's taking candy from a baby. He sees it like a game, and of course to keep his family as far away from poverty as he can. He started small, you know, simple things, like robbing from his teacher, from the crackheads down the street, but that was long ago. Now, he's stepped up his game. Tonight, he's going to rob the richest guy in...

3 months ago