Artburger

Australia

I'm a high school student in Australia and dream to publish a novel. Umm... I play the piano, I'm a Hufflepuff.

I also love feedback for my writing! Constructive feedback makes me happy :)

Message from Writer

Never give up on your passion. Whether that be writing, playing an instrument or anything else. If someone says you can't do something, go and prove them wrong. Don't worry about being bad at something because you can't become the best without first being the worst.

Also...
If you like any of my writing, fell free to like but also comment what you think! Any detailed/peer feedback is great and I'd be willing to return the favour.

Peer Reviews

The Evening News

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

The fact that people "grin" and "joke" about what's happening without seeming to care about the news gives an 'ignorance is bliss' kind of feeling which is interesting. I really like that.

about 1 year

Behind the Glass

PROMPT: Micro Memoir

Both the beginning line and last line are short and simple (which is good) and resonates with the reader. It could also be a connotation of how after everything that has happened to the girl, she is still the same as how she was the beginning; still unsure of herself.

about 1 year