phoebecpl

Singapore

Student | writing based on pure emotion

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Please help me extend my vocabulary haha

phoebecpl (Singapore) reviewed:

Final goodbyes.

PROMPT: All Talk

This piece very well encapsulates the essence of a mother's love.

almost 5 years ago

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phoebecpl (Singapore) published:

Or Is It Love?

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When you're unaccountable and apathetic,
But my one word to describe you is "perfect",
Is it delusion,
Or is it love?

When I trust you before you give me any reason to,
And give you half my heart though you reserve yours,
Is it stupidity, 
Or is it love?

When I ignore you though I love you to death,
Because I know you need the time alone,
Is it distress,
Or is it love?

When no song can denote the...

almost 5 years ago

phoebecpl (Singapore) published:

Done Talking

PROMPT: All Talk

"We're done talking now."
"Please, don't be sad."
"Just stop."
"I care about you, seriously."
"Is that funny?"
"Wow, that's fierce..."
"Hah."
"..."
"Who cares about me anyway?"
"You know I do."
"You don't have to."
"If I only cared about what I had to care about, life would suck."
"Go care about something else."
"It's people like us who need care the most."
"No...Just...Don't waste your time on pathetic things like me."
"I don't want you to be alone...

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almost 5 years ago

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phoebecpl (Singapore) reviewed:

Insubordination

PROMPT: All Talk

The power and feeling behind the words "I know" intensify as the piece goes on. To me, it shows how much the child knows that nothing he/she says will ever matter to the mother. It's significant to me how the...

almost 5 years ago

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phoebecpl (Singapore) published:

Complete Incompletion

PROMPT: Open Prompt

Minutes turned into hours. 
Wishing I could make things better. 
Hours turned into days. 
A desolate seat before me. 
Days turned into weeks. 
Writing to relieve my loss. 
Weeks turned into months. 
It never meant anything to me. 
Months turned into years. 
I hope you're doing alright. 
Years turned into my life. 
Incomplete without you. 

almost 5 years ago

phoebecpl (Singapore) published:

Loss

PROMPT: My December 2016

This month biting and rainy, 
Never anything more. 
The day I stepped foot in this world,
And you walked out the door. 

Jingle bells, the Christmas lights,
All the holiday cheer;
But I can't enjoy it undisturbed
Since I lost someone dear. 

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