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He’s crazy for her

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

The girl next door made him crazy.

Her laugh was more addictive than any drug on the market. Her cheeks looked rosy and warm in even the coldest of rooms. Her eyes looked like pools of honey whenever she stood under the sunlight. Her freckles were perfectly placed on her dainty nose and cheeks. Her hair always appeared presentably neat, even in her sleep.

She breathed softly, her lips sealed. He stood over her, lightly brushing his hand over her...

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Destbrat (United States) reviewed:

skinny-dipping

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

Best of luck!

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He’s crazy for her

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019


The girl next door made him crazy.

Her laugh was more addictive than any drug on the market. Her cheeks looked rosy and warm in even the coldest of rooms. Her eyes looked like pools of honey whenever she stood under the sunlight. Her freckles were perfectly placed on her dainty nose and cheeks. Her hair always appeared presentably neat, even in her sleep.

She breathed softly, her lips sealed. He stood over her, lightly brushing his hand over her...
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Destbrat (United States) published:

He’s crazy for her

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

He could never keep his eyes off of her. Despite her not even being aware of his existence, it was her beautiful ignorance that made him desire her even more.

Her laugh was more addictive than any drug on the market. Her cheeks rosy and warm in even the coldest of rooms. Her hair always gorgeously bouncy...even while she slept.

Her skin felt angelically smooth. She breathed softly and quietly, her lips sealed. He stood over her, brushing his hand over her unconscious...

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Destbrat (United States) published:

He’s crazy for her

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

The girl next door made him crazy. Despite
her not not even being aware of his existence, it was her beautiful ignorance that made him desire her even more.

Her laugh was more addictive than any drug on the market. Her cheeks rosy and warm in even the coldest of rooms. Her hair always gorgeously bouncy...even while she slept.

Her skin felt angelically smooth. She breathed softly and quietly, her lips sealed. He stood over her, brushing his hand over her unconscious...

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Destbrat (United States) reviewed:

The Thunderous Fall

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

Your use of figurative language is great, it really adds to the scene.

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