Sarah Gil

United States of America

Just a girl who wants to change the world.

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"Never let them take the light behind your eyes" - 'The light behind your eyes' My Chemical Romance

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Sarah Gil (United States of America)() published:

The real horror

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The real horror is not monsters
The real horror is something we foster
We let it grow and take root
It turns and bites our hand like a brute
We are our own monsters
And in hate we foster
The real horror we create
The real horror we debate
Under a constant burning flame
We ourselves turn to shame
Our humanity has left
Deformed like a cleft
Turn yourself to higher ground
Make yourself safe and sound
Do not leave...

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8 days ago

Sarah Gil (United States of America)() published:

The real horror

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The real horror is not monsters
The real horror is something we foster
We let it grow and take root
It turns and bites our hand like a brute
We are our own monsters
And in hate we foster
The real horror we create
The real horror we debate
Under a constant burning flame
We ourselves turn to shame
Our humanity has left
Deformed like a cleft
Turn yourself to higher ground
Make yourself safe and sound
Do not leave...

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8 days ago

Sarah Gil (United States of America)() reviewed:

Flawless

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Amazing work, but one little thing, in the last line "The bright smiles despite not being wake" sounds a bit off, if you changed 'wake' to 'awake' it might flow easier.

about 1 month ago

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Sarah Gil (United States of America)() published:

Cursed

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I am a cursed child
with hair untamed and wild
my body is thick
and everyone thinks I'm sick
they don't see me
I am a ghost in the sea
my body littered with scars
of past memoirs
I am a ghost in the sea,
I am a bad tasting tea
they pass me bye,
as I start to cry
this disease runs through my veins
and my heart it pains
I see you there
as you stare
you laugh...

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about 1 month ago

Sarah Gil (United States of America)() liked The real horror by Sarah Gil (United States of America)()

about 2 months ago

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Sarah Gil (United States of America)() published:

Secret meeting

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About 75 people arrived at secret in Nevada,
storm to see festivals in tiny towns
bone-rattling within distance of the gates,
a woman detained.

about 2 months ago

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Sarah Gil (United States of America)() published:

The real horror

FREE WRITING

The real horror is not monsters
The real horror is something we foster
We let it grow and take root
It turns and bites our hand like a brute
We are our own monsters
And in hate we foster
The real horror we create
The real horror we debate
Under a constant burning flame
We ourselves turn to shame
Our humanity has left
Deformed like a cleft
Turn yourself to higher ground
Make yourself safe and sound
Do not leave...

Seeking Peer Reviews

about 2 months ago

Sarah Gil (United States of America)() published:

Jack

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You were always loyal
Treating me as a royal
You sat at my feet
Giving me your heat
Your heart started to fail,
But to no avail
Could I save you
The reaper then slew
Now you are gone
I bury you at dawn
My heart falls to the floor
I shall cry out forever more
I remember the good times
In the wind they chime
My mind's in a daze
I'll miss you always

Seeking Peer Reviews

about 2 months ago

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Sarah Gil (United States of America)() published:

Jack

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You were always loyal
Treating me as a royal
You sat at my feet
Giving me your heat
Your heart started to fail,
But to no avail
Could I save you
The reaper then slew
Now you are gone
I bury you at dawn
My heart falls to the floor
I shall cry out forever more
I remember the good times
In the wind they chime
My mind's in a daze
I'll miss you always

Seeking Peer Reviews

about 2 months ago