tzemmy

Canada

tzemmy (Canada)() reviewed:

Rose Bushes

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

Careful with your tenses. Story boomerangs from past-tense to present and doesn't read as smooth. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this work. Keep it up!

5 months ago

tzemmy (Canada)() reviewed:

Loss

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

Keep writing! practice and feedback make everything better! :)

5 months ago

tzemmy (Canada)() reviewed:

Endearing Sardonicism

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

you seem to have good skill, I'd love to see a serious work from you :)

5 months ago

tzemmy (Canada)() reviewed:

Hope

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

Keep it up!

6 months ago

tzemmy (Canada)() reviewed:

Hunted

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

6 months ago

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6 months ago

tzemmy (Canada)() reviewed:

c l o s e r

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

6 months ago

tzemmy (Canada)() reviewed:

Myling

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

6 months ago

tzemmy (Canada)() reviewed:

Perfect

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

Really great concept, just work on the execution and you have an amazing piece of writing!

6 months ago