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tzemmy (Canada)() reviewed:
PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019
Careful with your tenses. Story boomerangs from past-tense to present and doesn't read as smooth. Otherwise, I really enjoyed this work. Keep it up!
5 months ago
Keep writing! practice and feedback make everything better! :)
you seem to have good skill, I'd love to see a serious work from you :)
Keep it up!
6 months ago
tzemmy (Canada)() earned a badge Pro Reviewer
Really great concept, just work on the execution and you have an amazing piece of writing!
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