Sarah Trieu

United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland

Aspiring author! For a long time, writing has been one of my passion. I particularly enjoy writing in the genres fantasy and romance, but when it comes to reading, I love detective crime and mysteries.

Message from Writer

Keep on writing! Write for yourself, not for money and not for others.

If you decide to read any of my works, I hope you enjoy!

Sarah Trieu (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() earned a badge Competitor

6 months ago

Sarah Trieu (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

Here Sits A Mournful Warrior

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

7 months ago

Sarah Trieu (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

Cola

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

Please keep in mind my comments, but asides from that, well done with the piece! The idea behind it was well thought out.

7 months ago

Sarah Trieu (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

Please don't cry

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

This really highlights the moment of Ben's death and you did a great job of creating the atmosphere and evoking emotion from the reader. Well done.

7 months ago

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7 months ago

Sarah Trieu (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() liked Here Sits A Mournful Warrior by Funk_Head (United States of America)()

7 months ago

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Sarah Trieu (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() published:

Last Hope

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

War had torn apart our world - where the vicious fires did not scorch the dwindling trees, the people, sick with fear, waged fights over the most trivial things. Where the grand, historical buildings did not crumble, the corrupt governments ordered for the most atrocious acts.

And where hatred did not plague, there was us.

In our last moments, we withheld desperate tears and held hands tightly, smiling, as if we could keep each other safe.

And you said to...

7 months ago

Sarah Trieu (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

Witch Dunking

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

Love your use of sensory language. Keep up the good work!

7 months ago

Sarah Trieu (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

The Taxidermist’s Office

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

A lot of sentences start with pronouns or articles, so you might want to consider changing some of the word orders.

7 months ago

Sarah Trieu (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

One, Two, Three

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

Make sure to consider word choices, as each word can paint an entirely new picture. Other than that, you have used lots of fantastic language devices and have written wonderfully.

7 months ago