Lottifus

United Kingdom

Author of various literary things, most of which end up being about animals as much as I try to stop them from being about animals. NaNoWriMo procrastinator. Cartoonist. Album review runner-up. Peer review winner. Instagram: @lottifus

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11 months ago

Lottifus (United Kingdom) reviewed:

in and out of the clouds (revised) #Helpme2020 #MagicalRealism

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It's been nice to read a piece that's very obviously come from a pure enjoyment of writing. Your writing style is still imperfect, as is everyone's, but this piece is a representation of a very clear and original narrative voice...

11 months ago

Lottifus (United Kingdom) reviewed:

The Crown of Flowers - Prologue/Chapter 1

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Thank you for commenting on my peer review request page - I'd actually already started the review before you commented, and I have reviews for chapters 2 and 3 in progress! I think there's definitely a lot of potential for...

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Lottifus (United Kingdom) published:

Anyone want some peer reviews?

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Hello everyone, I'm Lottie and I was the winning peer reviewer for the novel competition (ages ago, I know). I'm always looking to improve my editing skills, so if any of you have a piece you'd like me to review feel free to link it in the comments. What I'm going to warn you is that my reviews do tend to be very long - I will read through each line and annotate most of them, so there might be...

11 months ago

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Lottifus (United Kingdom) published:

Mind (Track One)

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I know everything
And I know nothing at all

I know it all

I know these thoughts
Because I've met them once before

I know the sun comes up
And in the night it falls
To my bedroom floor

To melt in the dark

And forget it all
I wish I could melt in the dark
And forget it all
But that's not what I'm for

I know the grass grows
And then it dries
And then grows again

I've...
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12 months ago

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Lottifus (United Kingdom) published:

Motorway

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Feet made for running
are made for dogs, or made for hares
that weave around the balconies,
leaving themselves snagged on the barbed wire
to dance under pylons.
Feet made for running
are not made for me.

Feet made for running
would not stop, would not lie still
to catch the heat, and send it to the head,
and hold the body backwards.
Feet made for running
would not hold me to my place
on the side
of the M25.
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