Hello everyone, I'm Lottie and I was the winning peer reviewer for the novel competition (ages ago, I know). I'm always looking to improve my editing skills, so if any of you have a piece you'd like me to review feel free to link it in the comments. What I'm going to warn you is that my reviews do tend to be very long - I will read through each line and annotate most of them, so there might be...

Feet made for running
are made for dogs, or made for hares
that weave around the balconies,
leaving themselves snagged on the barbed wire
to dance under pylons.
Feet made for running
are not made for me.

Feet made for running
would not stop, would not lie still
to catch the heat, and send it to the head,
and hold the body backwards.
Feet made for running
would not hold me to my place
on the side
of the M25.
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