PROMPT: Writing for Children Competition 2020
Again, I loved this story and hope you win the competition! I could really see this as a children's picture book too. I just want to emphasize these are all suggestions I made are based on my opinion and it's all up to you. I don't want you to feel bad if I was overly criticizing too (I hope not, but if so sorry). It's honestly awesome so far and I can't wait to see the finished product. Good luck!
PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2019