intoxicating starlight

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&youweren'tmine

PROMPT: Lunar Phrases

On the night I laid close to you in the dark,
I was too tense, too loud, and too scared.
    There were cars and grass and pecan-shells--
And the night wasn't beautiful,
It wasn't star-speckled and quiet.
It was cloud-cast, too loud, and you were scared.

On the night I felt your ribs press against mine,
You were too friendly, too absent, and too hidden.
    There were bats and pasta and dried leaves--
And the moon wasn't full, ...

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FREE WRITING

 i.    oh darling boy 

You are all softness, all caress and winks and shared grins,
And I am all softness, all stillness and snowflakes and flushed cheeks.

But you are also sharpness, all whiteness and thunder and unawaiting silence,
And I am also sharpness, all tempest and teeth and strangled screams.

ii.   are ladybugs more worth your gaze than i?

You are all soundless, all effortless and darlings and fluttered waves,
And I am all soundless, all breathless and...

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