sprinkledinwords

United Kingdom

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I post short stories and little poetic snippets, I'm learning as I go and making a lot of it up so any feedback is highly appreciated!

sprinkledinwords (United Kingdom) published:

II. the shimmer and shine

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Seven Years Later

The Queendom was painted in streaks of orange and pink as the sun lent gently behind the mountains, as if bowing to the villages that lay beyond. Summer was drawing to a close and Lyra wrapped her cloak tighter around her as she took her daily walk through Rivierdom, leaves crunching beneath her feet with every step. She made sure to adjust her hood as well, to keep the cold chill from biting her neck. Lyra could’ve...
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sprinkledinwords (United Kingdom) reviewed:

i. oracles, oceans, and gods

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I haven't written that many reviews and am not that skilled at doing it, but I hope this helps in some way! I loved reading it. (Also I've referred to the main character as she because with the pronoun 'you'...

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sprinkledinwords (United Kingdom) reviewed:

the moon has your eyes

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Stunning!

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sprinkledinwords (United Kingdom) reviewed:

it has been three years Prompt 4: #PrettyContest 1

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I can see how much of yourself you put into this, it reads very truthfully and raw - if this is inspired by real-life events I hope that writing this eased the thoughts in your head and your heart. These...

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sprinkledinwords (United Kingdom) reviewed:

modern-day artemis (REWRITTEN IN 2020) edited

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This has great potential! I noticed a couple of grammar issues but they can be quickly amended - and I may even be wrong, if I am please correct me!
Great work.

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