V-Rose

United States

14
Catholic
Sagittarius
Writer/Reader

Do not be so open-minded that your brains fall out.
-G.K. Chesterton

Write as if your life depends on it
(It might)

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Message from Writer

I will post prompts that I find/ have found here. If you find inspiration with these (which I hope you do) please let me know. I really like all of the prompts I find and I would love to see what you guys make of them. I'll change the prompts every week or so so that there is always something new.

Prompt #4
In an alternate universe, the caution sign "Children at play" is not what it seems. It is a warning.

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The best way to start the day is with a cup of coffee and a good book.
-V-Rose

Peer Reviews

Lost Sister (many drafts...)

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

Let me know if you have any more questions or need any help! -V

3 days

Unknown Anticipation

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

PERFECTION! I did mention a few areas were you might improve/edit some things, but they are just suggestions and thoughts. I hope this review was helpful. -V

5 days

Why I can't forget you PART 17

FREE WRITING

I hope this review is helpful! I LOVE THIS! ! ! ! !

8 days

The Angel's Eye

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

I hope this review was helpful and I can't wait to see how you continue with this! -V

8 days

nobody sees what I see

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

I hope this review is helpful! -V

9 days

Goodbye Darkness

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

I hope this review was helpful and please, let me know if you need any more help or have any other questions. -V

10 days

A Broken Summer Rhythm | Fourth Draft

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

I hope this review is helpful and let me know if you need any more help. -V

10 days

Creature of Fear (review for review?)

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2020

I LOVE THIS SO SO SO MUCH!!! I hope this review was helpful and I look forward to seeing how you continue with this.

11 days

Mind Readers in Math Class

FREE WRITING

I love this! It was amazing and I'm so glad you liked the prompt.

22 days

Outrunning fate | #SomethingUnique2

FREE WRITING

I hope this review was helpful and keep up the amazing work!

26 days

Fugitives | #boredwriter

FREE WRITING

I wonder why it was a mistake. I think they did the right thing running off with each other but... I don't know. I hope they're okay. I like Kate and Dom and I would love to hear more about them. I hope this review was helpful and that you continue writing this.

26 days

Why I can't forget you. PART 3

FREE WRITING

I loved, loved, loved this! She is so relatable! I hope this review was helpful. I look forward to reading more.

about 1 month

Why I can't forget you PART 1

FREE WRITING

It was such a joy to read this. I am so glad I inspired you. I hope this review was helpful.

about 1 month

Written Through Tears

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2020

This was amazing. I hope this review was helpful. One thing I wanted to add, though, was, maybe sign it in some way.

about 1 month

Love is... | #champion

FREE WRITING

I hope this review was helpful. The play was really awesome!

about 1 month

no card came this year

FREE WRITING

I hope this review was helpful for you and your friend. I really liked this.

about 1 month

No One Cares for the Wicked | #AllinNowin Prompt 2

FREE WRITING

I hope this review was helpful. This was amazing to read!

about 1 month

Noises in the Night

FREE WRITING

I hope this review was helpful but this was great to read and I am so happy I got to read it. SHIVERS!!!

about 2 months

Why I Don't celebrate Valentine's day || Should I submit it in a competition?

FREE WRITING

I hope this review was helpful. I'd say this was a joy to read but the end stopped me and now all I can say, is it was enlightening. I loved this piece. Amazing job.

about 2 months

3 ways i need to let go

PROMPT: Enumeration

A great piece to read and enjoy! That's what this was. And I enjoyed it so much! I hope this review was helpful.

about 2 months

life advice no one asked for

FREE WRITING

I loved this piece and everything it made me think about. I am one of the younger people on this site but I really loved this. I hope this review was helpful.

about 2 months

It Shouldn't End Like This (edited)

FREE WRITING

This is an amazing piece and I really hope that one day you find a story for it. And it shouldn't have ended like that, but it did, so now, want to know what Arther is going to do! Awesome job! I hope this review was helpful.

about 2 months

Rose's Flowers Chapter Eight and Nine

FREE WRITING

I loved these chapters. I hope this review was helpful and I hope to read more soon. Great job on your writing! Keep going and being awesome!

about 2 months

Rose's Flowers Chapter Four

FREE WRITING

I loved this and I hope this review was helpful. Can't wait for more! -V

about 2 months

Cedric + Hermione Part 2

FREE WRITING

Keep writing! This is great!

3 months

Cedric + Hermione Part 1 | #AllinNowin | #ReefirstComp Prompt5

FREE WRITING

This was really good. Thank you for letting me know about it!

3 months

Heights

FREE WRITING

I loved this piece and, in my opinion, there is very little you could do to revise it. You might add a few more punctuation marks to show how she took each step, one at a time. That's all I could find but I loved this piece and I look forward to seeing your awesome work!

4 months

Expectations and Inequalities - Feminism Slam Poem

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2020

I loved this piece! It was so inspirational and even though I don't face most of these problems where I live, I could relate to you because most of what you said related to how we are stuck in the predicaments we are because people told us what we could and couldn't do. You are an amazing writer! Keep it up. And don't ever forget, you define you. KEEP WRITING!!

4 months

This I Believe

PROMPT: This I Believe…

This piece was really good. There were a few grammatical errors that I pointed out but I loved your writing. KEEP WRITING!!!!

5 months

Homeland

FREE WRITING

Please write more! This was so good. Again I say, Awesome job

5 months

The Crown

FREE WRITING

You have a few times where you go from passive to active voice. Try to find all the places and change them all to one voice. Other than that, I really want to hear more about Emily.

7 months

The Blessing of the Doll Eyes | Revised Version

FREE WRITING

I loved this piece. It is captivating! And I love the change in the girl. It was really attention-grabbing. KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!! (Either more on this or on Incognito. I wouldn't be to upset to read more on either. (Meaning I would love to read more!))

7 months

Rule #1

PROMPT: Talking to "You"

I positively loved this piece! It was incredible and your use of 2nd person POV was awesome! KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!! (Your 2nd person POV was great!)

7 months

Soulmate Marks (A Short Story)

PROMPT: Open Prompt

7 months

At last, she had burned into rebirth.

PROMPT: Beginish

I LOVE THIS ONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

7 months

Tragicomedy: Wedding Cake (Revised)

PROMPT: Comedy or Tragedy?

This piece was really great.

7 months

Atlas

FREE WRITING

I am sorry if anything was too blunt but... here is what I think you could do better on. It's really not a lot!

7 months

Slip-Up at the Hibachi Resturant.

FREE WRITING

I love this piece! KEEP WRITING!!!!!!

8 months

The First Six Chapters of INCOGNITO

FREE WRITING

I can't wait to hear more. KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

9 months

Legacy Trajectory

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2019

KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!

9 months

Ready Or Not

FREE WRITING

KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!

10 months

Beyond the Trees #Thisismyway

FREE WRITING

PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

10 months

Apologetic

FREE WRITING

I really liked this and it really makes you think about it for a while.

about 1 year

Incognito: A New Beginning

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

Star Infinity (Chapter 1) - Revised

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

Her Forest

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

Incognito: The Dark History of the Mirrorlings

FREE WRITING

This was amazing. I hope you continue writing and write more soon.

about 1 year

Incognito: Chapter 3

FREE WRITING

I can't wait for more.

about 1 year

Little Star

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

Incognito: Chapter 1

FREE WRITING

I like it. I really do.

about 1 year

Don’t Make Me Cry

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2019

about 1 year

Paradise Lost

PROMPT: Song Writing Competition 2019

I really like this. I hope you add on or do more like this.

about 1 year

The Mask of Terror and Suffocating Grasps

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

To the Stranger (I Used to Know)

FREE WRITING

I don't know if this helped but I like the poem.

about 1 year

My Life is Perfect and That's Part of the Pain #MentalHealthMonth

FREE WRITING

Thank you for writing this. I think it tells people who are told they have perfect lives aren't alone.

about 1 year

Understanding My Views...

FREE WRITING

VOTE PRO-LIFE. A PERSON IS A PERSON NO MATTER HOW SMALL! -DR. SUESS

about 1 year

May I Have this Dance?

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

Dancing at World's End

PROMPT: In The End

about 1 year

May I Have this Dance?

FREE WRITING

Please, please, please add on to this. I really want to hear more!

about 1 year

Between the Lines - Chapter 1: Fade Away

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

Goodbye, Goodbye

PROMPT: In The End

about 1 year

The Emerald Goblet: Chapter 5

FREE WRITING

For shoving through it is really good. I know I've shoved myself through a few chapters of my stories.

about 1 year

Not What the World Wants

PROMPT: Op-Ed Competition 2019

Be who you really want to be.

about 1 year

The Power of Listening

PROMPT: #ListenFirst

about 1 year

The Fay-Born Legacy: The Bitter Reunion

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

Loving A Broken Heart

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

The Imperfect Ending

PROMPT: In The End

Super funny. I hope you add more to this later on.

about 1 year

No Sarcasm Included

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

Oh, Brother

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

The Something and Nothing of Pain

FREE WRITING

It is so true and it makes me remember why I write.

about 1 year

The Fay-Born Legacy: A Desirable Paradise

FREE WRITING

I haven't heard the first part but this one is great!

about 1 year

Summer dream

FREE WRITING

about 1 year

A Magical Wish

PROMPT: Truths and Untruths

about 1 year