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Ak2000pro

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Ak2000pro (United Kingdom) reviewed:

When the Earth Fell Away

FREE WRITING

Brilliant writing, rethink paragraphs.

4 months ago

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Ak2000pro (United Kingdom) reviewed:

Real Life Problems

FREE WRITING

Who are these things problems for, try to clarify but otherwise great start.

4 months ago

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Ak2000pro (United Kingdom) reviewed:

I Am

PROMPT: On Courage

I think the poem will leave other readers with similar feelings. Although the lack of rhythm scheme adds a sense of maturity, by adding it, the poem will flow more and stick in the reader's head. Also, try to make...

4 months ago

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Ak2000pro (United Kingdom) published:

Blessings from above

PROMPT: Bread and Light

To be loved and to love,
To feel as free as a dove,

To be cared for and care, 
To never be trapped in a manipulator's lair, 

To eat and have someone to eat with, 
Someone that will destroy any monolith, 

To have friends,
To be able to deal with life's bends,

To be able to make your own path
and not suffer from His wrath,

To have somneone that cares 
and someone that shares.

To have something to die...

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Ak2000pro (United Kingdom) published:

Photoshop Just Got Real

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2019

'Miss Selena Robinson, what on Earth did you do?'' she panicked, asking herself a question she alone knew the repugnant truth about. 

Everything was black and white and grey. Monotonous like the picture of herself that she had 'colour-splashed'. Her eyes perceived only grey scale as a timer ticked inside her head, washing the sickness away. Each one yelled as they left, announcing their departure. Where had the time gone?

Everyone messed around at work, even overloaded graphic designers sharing...

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