lilamarie

Singapore

I'm the type of person that gets an adrenaline rush from writing. 15 going on 16 - don't judge a story by its author's age, alright?

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Shower me with constructive criticism because I can't control my abuse of adjectives.

lilamarie (Singapore)() published:

I'm Not Six Anymore, And You're Still Trying To Be An Honest Man

PROMPT: Friendship Narrative Competition 2016

             Jean remembered. There wasn’t much from before that he wanted to- nothing of use to him since- but there were a few things he had to keep. On his better days, when the lingering shock of light on the back of his eyelids did not fade into the shadows of monsters, he allowed himself the indulgence. Such was a day that day, and with time to spare before the night crossed the threshold of his stronghold, Jean shuffled himself under the...

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lilamarie (Singapore)() published:

The Shape of a Girl

PROMPT: Setting as Mood


Miggy's eyelids lifted, trailed by the lingering tail of slumber, far too awake in the instant yet not resisting. Their periphery was greeted with such soft whiteness - the sight of the blurred white ceiling illuminated by the clear light of the a.m., muffled pinches of the morning chill floating around with the white noise of Kitty Kallen's crooning - and their body felt so very good under the thin white blanket; their growing sharpness did not appreciate this. Miggy...
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lilamarie (Singapore)() reviewed:

Forever Means Forever

PROMPT: Setting as Mood

The best way to emphasise on a point is to not say the point which in this case is tension. The first and fifth line did a good job at letting the reader catch a hint of that tension you...

almost 4 years ago

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lilamarie (Singapore)() published:

The Shape of a Girl

PROMPT: Setting as Mood


Miggy's eyelids lifted, trailed by the lingering tail of slumber, far too awake in the instant yet not resisting. Their periphery was greeted with such soft whiteness - the sight of the blurred white ceiling illuminated by the clear light of the a.m., muffled pinches of the morning chill floating around with the white noise of Kitty Kallen's crooning - and their body felt so very good under the thin white blanket; their growing sharpness did not appreciate this. Miggy...
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almost 4 years ago

lilamarie (Singapore)() published:

The Shape of a Girl

PROMPT: Setting as Mood


Miggy's eyelids lifted, trailed by the lingering tail of slumber, far too awake in the instant yet not resisting. Their periphery was greeted with such soft whiteness - the sight of the blurred white ceiling illuminated by the clear light of the a.m., muffled pinches of the morning chill floating around with the white noise of Kitty Kallen's crooning - and their body felt so very good under the thin white blanket; their growing sharpness did not appreciate this. Miggy...
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almost 4 years ago

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almost 4 years ago

lilamarie (Singapore)() published:

The Shape of a Girl

PROMPT: Setting as Mood


Miggy's eyelids lifted, trailed by the lingering tail of slumber, far too awake in the instant yet not resisting. Their periphery was greeted with such soft whiteness - the sight of the blurred white ceiling illuminated by the clear light of the a.m., muffled pinches of the morning chill floating around with the white noise of Kitty Kallen's crooning - and their body felt so very good under the thin white blanket; their growing sharpness did not appreciate this. Miggy...
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almost 4 years ago

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lilamarie (Singapore)() published:

Drive

PROMPT: Six-Word Memoir

Highway-hypnotized into committing  a seaside suicide 

almost 4 years ago