Crow

United States of America

I met the Queen and had tea with her after I defeated a dragon with my trusty katanas. Then I accidentally spilled hot tea in some noble’s face, so I was banished from England. If I return, I'll be executed on spot.

Crow (United States of America)() reviewed:

ahhhhh random title

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This was an interesting piece. I'm really curious about the backstory to this. You have some really good metaphors. Not sure if this is what happened to your target audience, but the last stanza makes it seem as if they...

3 months ago

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Crow (United States of America)() published:

reviewers' club - October Reviewing Pairs

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Salutations. I got tired of waiting, and I figured that the mastermind behind the reviewers' club was busy... So here's a list of reviewing pairs. 

1: ​Kenny +  and-peggy
2:​ fatpanda +​ ajamwal
3:​ pencils.and.paper.roses +​ rainandsonder
4:​ Fatima M + New York_dreamer 
5: ​ --RosieOnTheRun (from reality)-- ​+ Dmoral13
6:​ Harlow + r|A|i|N 
7:​ parachutes + ​Okapi
8: ​weirdo ​+ Crow
9: ​Victoria Martin +​ Juliana
10: pineapples + The Dreamer​ + BurningMidnightOil
(pineapples can review The Dreamer, The Dreamer can review BurningMidnightOil, and BurningMidnightOil can review pineapples)

(I didn't link the accounts because you should be able to easily find...

3 months ago

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Crow (United States of America)() published:

reviewers' club - October Reviewing Pairs

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Salutations. I got tired of waiting, and I figured that the mastermind behind the reviewers' club was busy... So here's a list of reviewing pairs. 

1: ​Kenny +  Quille
2:​ fatpanda +​ ajamwal
3:​ pencils.and.paper.roses +​ rainandsonder
4:​ Fatima M + New York_dreamer 
5: ​ --RosieOnTheRun (from reality)-- ​+ Dmoral13
6:​ Harlow + r|A|i|N 
7:​ parachutes + ​Okapi
8: ​weirdo ​+ Crow
9: ​Victoria Martin +​ Juliana
10: pineapples + The Dreamer​ + BurningMidnightOil
(pineapples can review The Dreamer, The Dreamer can review BurningMidnightOil, and BurningMidnightOil can review pineapples)

(I didn't link the accounts because you should be able to easily find...

4 months ago

Crow (United States of America)() liked broken shards #tellastory by weirdo (United States of America)()

4 months ago

Crow (United States of America)() liked The Periodic Table of Elements #thisismyway by Dmoral13 (United States of America)()

4 months ago

Crow (United States of America)() published:

reviewers' club - October Reviewing Pairs

FREE WRITING

Salutations. I got tired of waiting, and I figured that the mastermind behind the reviewers' club was busy... So here's a list of reviewing pairs. 

1: ​Kenny +  Quille
2:​ fatpanda +​ ajamwal
3:​ pencils.and.paper.roses +​ rainandsonder
4:​ Fatima M + New York_dreamer 
5: ​ --RosieOnTheRun (from reality)-- ​+ Dmoral13
6:​ Harlow + r|A|i|N 
7:​ parachutes + ​Okapi
8: ​weirdo ​+ Crow
9: ​Victoria Martin +​ Juliana
10: pineapples + The Dreamer​

(I didn't link the accounts because you should be able to easily find them.)

If you're confused refer to the reviewers' club account for all the information and guidelines. 

4 months ago

2

Crow (United States of America)() published:

reviewers' club - October Reviewing Pairs

FREE WRITING

Salutations. I got tired of waiting, and I figured that the mastermind behind the reviewers' club was busy... So here's a list of reviewing pairs. 

1: ​Kenny +  Quille
2:​ fatpanda +​ ajamwal
3:​ pencils.and.paper.roses +​ rainandsonder
4:​ Fatima M + New York_dreamer 
5: ​ --RosieOnTheRun (from reality)-- ​+ Crow
6:​ Harlow + r|A|i|N 
7:​ parachutes + ​Okapi
8: ​weirdo ​+ Dmoral13
9: ​Victoria Martin +​ Juliana
10: pineapples + The Dreamer​

(I didn't link the accounts because you should be able to easily find them.)

If you're confused refer to the reviewers' club account for all the information and guidelines. 

4 months ago

2

Crow (United States of America)() published:

I'd Rather be Alone, Thanks.

PROMPT: Human Connections Essay Competition 2019

    It began with an email, one seemingly unimportant email from one seemingly unimportant person. The sender, a stranger named Lilac, claimed she was a good friend, speaking on behalf of our mutual friend Ishani. Her benevolent message? "[Ishani] is depressed because of you." What? I frowned. Maybe I misread... Nope, I didn't. But... I hadn't sinned against Ishani. Why did I do? And who was Lilac besides my faceless judge? It's probably just nonsense. I should delete it. Why dignify...

4 months ago

Crow (United States of America)() published:

I'd Rather be Alone, Thanks.

PROMPT: Human Connections Essay Competition 2019

    It began with an email, one seemingly unimportant email from one seemingly unimportant person. The sender Lilac claimed she was a good friend, speaking on behalf of our mutual friend Ishani. Her message? "[Ishani] is depressed because of you." What? I asked, shocked and confused. Why? I hadn't sinned against Ishani. Who was Lilac even, besides a stranger who couldn’t blame me to my face? I desired to delete the email. Why dignify such an accusation with a response?...

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4 months ago

Crow (United States of America)() reviewed:

Hope #realitymeetsfantasy

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You have a very compelling story. I love the "teasing." Play around with different titles. Is there a title that would make your story even more compelling and interesting? Perhaps, there is such a title. Either way, your story is...

4 months ago