jashles

United States

jashles (United States) reviewed:

Switching Identities (REVIEW FOR REVIEW!!!)

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

All of my edits are just suggestions. Feel free to use or discard them as you please. And again, please keep writing! I think you have so much in you that the world deserves to hear.

10 months ago

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jashles (United States) published:

Honey

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Milo rapped on my window the next morning. He smiled at me, cheerily waving me over with his infectious smile. I put on a show of reluctance as I rolled off my poorly made bed and lifted that glass between us.
“Don’t roll your eyes. You know you missed me,” he teased.
“I’ll close this window so fast-”
“Come to Black Sand Beach with me,” he blurted.
“Milo, you know I’m not supposed to hang out with you,” I told...

10 months ago

jashles (United States) liked Beers and Camaros by NaiadIna (Australia)

10 months ago

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jashles (United States) published:

Honey

PROMPT: Novel Writing Competition 2020

Milo rapped on my window the next morning. He smiled at me, cheerily waving me over with his infectious smile. I put on a show of reluctance as I rolled off my poorly made bed and lifted that glass between us.
“Don’t roll your eyes. You know you missed me,” he teased.
“I’ll close this window so fast-”
“Come to Black Sand Beach with me,” he blurted.
“Milo, you know I’m not supposed to hang out with you,” I told...

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10 months ago

3

jashles (United States) published:

Birds Sing of Unrequited Love

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2020

Dear Lily,

    We kissed twice under a pasty gray-black sky, illuminated by sickly yellow street lights that polluted our view of the stars. It was too dark for me to see your face, but I could picture it. The hours I spent soaking up your intoxicating mannerisms allowed me to paint you in front of me with the same soft smile and kind eyes I had fallen in love with. I felt your smile against my lips as my body...

about 1 year ago

jashles (United States) published:

Birds Sing of Unrequited Love

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2020

Dear Lily,

    We kissed twice under a pasty gray-black sky, illuminated by sickly yellow street lights that polluted our view of the stars. It was too dark for me to see your face, but I could picture it. The hours I spent soaking up your intoxicating mannerisms allowed me to paint you in front of me with the same soft smile and kind eyes I had fallen in love with. I felt your smile against my lips as my body...

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about 1 year ago

jashles (United States) published:

Birds Sing of Unrequited Love

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2020

Dear Lily,

    We kissed twice under a pasty gray-black sky, illuminated by sickly yellow street lights that polluted our view of the stars. It was too dark for me to see your face, but I could picture it. The hours I spent soaking up your intoxicating mannerisms allowed me to paint you in front of me with the same soft smile and kind eyes I had fallen in love with. I felt your smile against my lips as my body...

Seeking Peer Reviews

about 1 year ago

jashles (United States) liked a patriot on the fourth of july by sunny.v (United States)

about 1 year ago

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jashles (United States) published:

Birds Sing of Unrequited Love

PROMPT: Letter Writing Competition 2020

Dear           ,
    We kissed twice under a pasty gray-black sky, illuminated by sickly yellow street lights that polluted our view of the stars. It was too dark for me to see your face, but I could picture it. The hours I spent soaking up your intoxicating mannerisms allowed me to paint you in front of me with the same soft smile and kind eyes I had fallen in love with. I felt your smile...

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about 1 year ago

jashles (United States) liked Reuniting with culture. by Imanq (Saudi Arabia)

over 1 year ago