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Sending in reviews and writing for a few competitions. :)
“One must always be careful of books," said Tessa, "and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.”
― Cassandra Clare, Clockwork Angel
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_Goldrose_ (United Kingdom) reviewed:
I really liked this piece! You are very good at writing, it was very powerful but, try to quicken the pace of the story or edit it shorter.
5 days ago
I don't think there is much you can change with this piece because as you said yourself, it's just your thoughts so it won't make much sense to others, I do love your choice of writing though, well done.
26 days ago
So far it seems good! Try adding more lines and paragraphs to it, deepen it. Well done!
_Goldrose_ (United Kingdom) liked
by El1678 (Australia)
28 days ago
_Goldrose_ (United Kingdom) earned a badge Favoriter
PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition
Try to make it longer, adding in more information, so far its very good!
I really enjoyed this piece, try to fix up your grammar and add more to the story! It's very good so far, well done!
PROMPT: Micro Memoir
Try to make it longer if you can! It's a good piece and brings a nice feel to it in the end, well done!
_Goldrose_ (United Kingdom) earned a badge Top Critic
Try to remember tenses, I always mix them up as well. Like in the first paragraph, "But got faced..." and in the first sentence, "you are walking through..." Well done! I enjoyed this piece.
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