Whateverthismightbe

United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland

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“One must always be careful of books," said Tessa, "and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.”
― Cassandra Clare, Clockwork Angel

Whateverthismightbe (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

He

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This is a very good piece of writing, its very poetic and well written. Congratulations

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Whateverthismightbe (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

20 things that make me happy

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I loved reading this and keep on writing! :)

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Whateverthismightbe (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

Heart, standby

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I really enjoyed this piece, I loved how short yet very interesting! Congrats and keep on writing :)

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Whateverthismightbe (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() published:

Snow

PROMPT: Zoom Out

She shuts her eyes closed tightly, slamming the book shut. She didn't want to imagine it, she shook her head her bright red, curly hair spilling across her face. She sighs, looking up from her hands in dispair. She didn't know how she would survive without her favourite side charector, Alice. She stood up with a heavy sigh, throwing the curtains open and melting into the view, the crispy snow had fallen over-night across the farm-land. Each tree covered in...

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Whateverthismightbe (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

The Stone and the Sword Chapter:1

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I love this piece! The story is very interesting and I have so many questions but, it is only the first chapter. Well done, the descriptions and the whole idea is very charming and I'd love to know more about...

14 days ago

Whateverthismightbe (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

Talkin' Nerves

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If you ever need help with rhyming I use 'RhymeZone' it's very helpful but, I enjoyed this piece of writing! Well done!

16 days ago

Whateverthismightbe (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() reviewed:

The Bitter Truth

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This is very good so far! I loved the use of descriptions and the ending! Well done! :)

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Whateverthismightbe (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() published:

Star wish

PROMPT: Star Wish

As I stare across the sky, 
the glittering stars and sparkiling light, 
I'm more than glad I'm spending it with someone 
But, it's not the same without all of you 
and all I could wish for was you 
and your happiness, 
for your wellbeing 
and that I would see you all soon. 

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17 days ago

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Whateverthismightbe (United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland)() published:

The fateful day

PROMPT: Lyrical Stratum

The time: 
It was exactly four am, the sun hadn't even risen yet, the sky was dark and the air was cold. It looked as if it were eleven. But you could feel it was four. 

The place: 
The stairs in the back, the ones that lead into the garage that would lead to a garden that had even more stairs. Those would lead to the driveway and then to the gate. 

The reason: 
to visit the place we had...
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