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_Goldrose_

United Kingdom

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“One must always be careful of books," said Tessa, "and what is inside them, for words have the power to change us.”
― Cassandra Clare, Clockwork Angel

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_Goldrose_ (United Kingdom) reviewed:

save the world- from ourselves

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I really liked this piece! You are very good at writing, it was very powerful but, try to quicken the pace of the story or edit it shorter.

5 days ago

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_Goldrose_ (United Kingdom) reviewed:

Seventh Sense

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I don't think there is much you can change with this piece because as you said yourself, it's just your thoughts so it won't make much sense to others, I do love your choice of writing though, well done.

26 days ago

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_Goldrose_ (United Kingdom) reviewed:

In the mirror

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So far it seems good! Try adding more lines and paragraphs to it, deepen it. Well done!

26 days ago

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28 days ago

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28 days ago

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_Goldrose_ (United Kingdom) reviewed:

The Web Along The Ground

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition

Try to make it longer, adding in more information, so far its very good!

28 days ago

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_Goldrose_ (United Kingdom) reviewed:

The Boy at the Train Station

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I really enjoyed this piece, try to fix up your grammar and add more to the story! It's very good so far, well done!

28 days ago

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_Goldrose_ (United Kingdom) reviewed:

Good Times and Tan Lines

PROMPT: Micro Memoir

Try to make it longer if you can! It's a good piece and brings a nice feel to it in the end, well done!

28 days ago

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_Goldrose_ (United Kingdom) reviewed:

Where Hope Hides

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Try to remember tenses, I always mix them up as well. Like in the first paragraph, "But got faced..." and in the first sentence, "you are walking through..." Well done! I enjoyed this piece.

28 days ago