Rainbowpie

United States of America

Hi! I like to write poems and short stories. I would like advice on how to be a better writer.

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Rainbowpie (United States of America)() published:

Thankful

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"Now we can all say what we are thankful for"
Said the mother, hiding her intoxication.

"I'm thankful for everyone here!"
Said the suck up tween boy who will do anything
To get his grades to A's.

"I'm thankful for the food we have here today!"
Said the girl who has been suffering
From anorexia since the age of eleven.

"I am thankful for my job and my lovely wife!"
Said the father who had been having affairs 
With all...

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2 months ago

Rainbowpie (United States of America)() published:

Walking Serotonin

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Eyes like icicles
A laugh like a toxin
Causing people exposed
To chuckle

I can't remember
When I last had
An opening in my heart
For someone as marvelous
As you

Butterflies when I am
Able to see you again
Nothing but pure bliss
A Euphoria

Your piercing gaze lands
On my delicate two-toned eyes.
An immediate rush of pink
Fills my cheeks.

It is odd to have
Something to be closing 
The gap in my heart
But fulfilling, too
...

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7 months ago

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Rainbowpie (United States of America)() published:

Dream

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The sky is clear,
The birds are chirping,
Your little country home
Standing tall.

You burst outside,
Ready for the day.
Your life is perfect
In every way.

You leave your house
Ready to explore!
You follow a shadow
To a mysterious cave.

The cave is musky,
dark, and damp.
You trudge down a body of water
In the strange environment.

Something moves.
Someone stomped.
The shadow disappears.
In the blink of an eye

A...

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Rainbowpie (United States of America)() published:

"Disguise"

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Awake at 5 AM
Done at 7.
This piece of expression
Takes a while
To perfect.

Pinks, Purples,
Reds, Blues
Lights, Darks.
Different nudes.

You put it on.
Happy for once.
Out the door you go
In your beautiful "disguise".

Fake they say.
Wrong they say.
Don't hide who you are.
Take it off.
Just stop.
Don't be fake.

Chemicals and wipes
All over the floor.
Blacks, grays,
Smudging pain.
Streaks of tears
In splotches on towels.

It was what...

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7 months ago

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Rainbowpie (United States of America)() published:

Chapter 5 (Sparky's PoV)

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    After a short walk, we stalked into what looked like a Tattoo parlor, "Why the hell are we here?" I said as I looked around the place. Damien pointed out the small section with jewelry. "Buy me these!" He exclaimed while running over to the glass display case. He pointed out a pair of diamond-encrusted skull studs. "Wow..." I marveled at them, "Wait, why do you need these?!" "Because they're pretty and I want them, so buy them." He snapped...

8 months ago

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Rainbowpie (United States of America)() published:

Digital

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A day to be alive, they say.
A wonderful world to live in.
Do they even know
About all the horror
That causes people
To go insane
And wish to die?

All the deaths
caught on TV.
A horror to see
Why do people
Like seeing other people
Struggle and suffer.

The TV catches
More deaths
Like rockets
trying to take off
But failing.
People don't care.
Some people want to see
The misery the families face
After another digital ...

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Rainbowpie (United States of America)() published:

0.0 |.o

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Look outside!
The trees are swaying,
The rain is pouring,
But what is that?

Out the window!
The bluebirds sing,
The rabbits scamper,
But who is out there?

Open the door!
The cars drive past,
The puddles splash,
But someone is standing there!

Slam the door closed!
Lock it tight!
Close the blinds!
HIDE!

Look outside once more, my friend!
Nobody it there!
You're safe here!
Just Relax!

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8 months ago