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Rainbowpie

United States

Hi! I like to write poems and short stories. I would like advice on how to be a better writer.

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Rainbowpie (United States) published:

Reader?

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Hello?
Can you hear me?
Can you see me?
On the other side?

You.
Staring at your screen?
Reading this poem?
Sitting, standing,
Whatever.

I want you to know this:
You are loved,
You are appreciated,
And you are special.

With love
~Rainbowpie
















P.S. Don't forget to read each poem VERY closely starting with this one.  Who knows, you might find a message!
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Rainbowpie (United States) published:

"Disguise"

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Awake at 5 AM
Done at 7.
This piece of expression
Takes a while
To perfect.

Pinks, Purples,
Reds, Blues
Lights, Darks.
Different nudes.

You put it on.
Happy for once.
Out the door you go
In your beautiful "disguise".

Fake they say.
Wrong they say.
Don't hide who you are.
Take it off.
Just stop.
Don't be fake.

Chemicals and wipes
All over the floor.
Blacks, grays,
Smudging pain.
Streaks of tears
In splotches on towels.

It was what...

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11 days ago

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Rainbowpie (United States) published:

Chapter 5 (Sparky's PoV)

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    After a short walk, we stalked into what looked like a Tattoo parlor, "Why the hell are we here?" I said as I looked around the place. Damien pointed out the small section with jewelry. "Buy me these!" He exclaimed while running over to the glass display case. He pointed out a pair of diamond-encrusted skull studs. "Wow..." I marveled at them, "Wait, why do you need these?!" "Because they're pretty and I want them, so buy them." He snapped...

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Rainbowpie (United States) published:

Digital

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A day to be alive, they say.
A wonderful world to live in.
Do they even know
About all the horror
That causes people
To go insane
And wish to die?

All the deaths
caught on TV.
A horror to see
Why do people
Like seeing other people
Struggle and suffer.

The TV catches
More deaths
Like rockets
trying to take off
But failing.
People don't care.
Some people want to see
The misery the families face
After another digital ...

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22 days ago

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Rainbowpie (United States) published:

0.0 |.o

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Look outside!
The trees are swaying,
The rain is pouring,
But what is that?

Out the window!
The bluebirds sing,
The rabbits scamper,
But who is out there?

Open the door!
The cars drive past,
The puddles splash,
But someone is standing there!

Slam the door closed!
Lock it tight!
Close the blinds!
HIDE!

Look outside once more, my friend!
Nobody it there!
You're safe here!
Just Relax!

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22 days ago

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Rainbowpie (United States) published:

Digital

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A day to be alive, they say.
A wonderful world to live in.
Do they even know
About all the horror
That causes people
To go insane
And wish to die?

All the deaths
caught on TV.
A horror to see
Why do people
Like seeing other people
Struggle and suffer.

The TV catches
More deaths
Like rockets
trying to take off
But failing.
People don't care.
Some people want to see
The misery the families face
After another digital ...

22 days ago

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23 days ago

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Rainbowpie (United States) published:

Chapter 4~Get in loser! (Crystal's POV)

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    "Hello?" I start, annoyed.  I can't believe I'm doing this.  I don't agree with anyone!  I probably might just get something small 'cause I want to...not because Star is making me.  "When are you open, and what do you offer?" "Piercings and tattoos," the person on the other line says.   Tattoos?  I might be underage, but I want one!  "Ok! An appointment for piercings and a tattoo!" I say with excitement in my voice.  "WHAT are you doing? ...

24 days ago