beannn

Australia

hiya!
love u

Peer Reviews

inside looking out

FREE WRITING

great piece! keep going with your amazing work :)

about 1 month

Seasons

FREE WRITING

I love this poem, keep going!

about 1 month

Man of Bones

FREE WRITING

i like this poem! keep going! <3

about 1 month

was none of it true

FREE WRITING

I love this piece, good job! i hope you have a lovely day, enjoy the sun dear <3

about 1 month

Bittersweet(Apology in advance for the following:)

FREE WRITING

this is a great piece! very moving

about 1 month

How I met this lady

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition: 2021

2 months

Driving Through the Rain

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4 months

honey

FREE WRITING

great job!!

4 months

Layers

FREE WRITING

This piece holds a great place in my heart, keep up the great work!

9 months

The Tables have Turned

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unknown

An Apology

FREE WRITING

very great ! <3

over 1 year

drain

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over 1 year

The Mask of Wrath & Baleful Ice

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unknown

Anger

FREE WRITING

Great job writing this piece, but for additional notes, try making it a little clearer towards the end. What did the last sentence mean, if it had any underlying meaning to it?

over 1 year

My Pencils All Broke, So I'm Converting To Mechanicalism

FREE WRITING

This is a good piece for connecting and expressing something as simple as this, good work :)

almost 2 years

THE BIRTH OF ENDS

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

almost 2 years

Rain

PROMPT: Flash Fiction Competition 2019

The fact that the girl is ill and dying sets a melancholic tone to this, which brings out a few things. 1) we begin to see how people are when reacting to heartbreak, and in this case, they all react differently. I think this really helps in setting the tone, it makes the reader feel sad for the people in this piece. 2) the thoughts of the main character. We see how she struggles with managing to cope, eg cutting her hair, running etc, and not obeying the doctor's instructions. It tells me she has basically given up. This is a great way to set the layout of the story. the second sentence is a great giveaway that tells us this girl is ill, however, I wasn't sure who ended up dying. The storyline makes perfect sense.

almost 2 years

The Ocean and Other Animals

PROMPT: Water Body

this is a really good piece, just be careful with your words :)

about 2 years

Triteness of Being

PROMPT: Unplugged: Op-Ed Competition

the way you make your words flow is a true talent i love it

about 2 years