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Upsidownpenguin

United States

Self taught freelancer. probably 17.
“Why . . . would a penguin be in a piss pot?
"Wait, seriously, what's a piss pot?”
― Pat Shand, Destiny, NY, Volume One: Who I Used to Be
Write Free

Message from Writer

“Some men will let you down because they get bored with you, or distracted. Or because not letting you down has never been important to them. Some men will let you down and not even realize you were depending on them.”
“A man is better than the worst thing he’s ever done,”
“Deserve is a tricky word.”
- Matthew Colville

“Screw you, I want my final words with you to be indignant and irritated.”
“I have an intelligence of six. I know what I’m doing.”
“You will leave when Burt Reynolds tells you to leave.”
“Life needs things to live.”
“You act as though the laws of the anthill affect the boot that crushes it.”
- Various members of Vox Machina and their enemies

Peer Reviews

The Only Thing I’m Certain Of Is That I Want To Feel a Younger Star’s Light Across My Eyelids

FREE WRITING

Lovely work! Yohr writing always leaves me stunned for a few minutes. The way you add voice to your work is excellent, which makes the writing feel like reality for a few moments.

9 days ago

This Is Where You Exit Scene

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition

For getting under 1000 words, my only recommendation is cutting down on unnecessary sentences. If it doesn't contribute to the story, it shouldn't exist. That's my two cents anyways. It can be hard to determine where those sentences might be, and maybe you don't even have them.

about 1 month ago