GREAT EFFORT.Nice plot.Hope you come up with the next part soon:-)
Nice Plot.MUST-READ Piece.PLEASE continue with this story. Queen of the seas is the most apt title for it.
This writing is surely something which I suggest everyone to read and understand. Keep on writing and climbing steps to succeed. I am sorry if I did amy mistakes in reviewing as we all are in the great process of learning.
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I think solutions of these problems should be put in the footnote to end the pice on a better note. Your writing is great keep going. All the very best.
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I think the second part can be much clear so as for those unaware about mythology. And you can try using good phrases which make the readers feel the situation through imagery. And apology I had no intention to criticize but my aim is that all writers go on improving and if I did a mistake kindly ignore.
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It was very nice reviewing this wonderful piece. I am not that experienced writer. I have just marked few thing, I saw from my opinion. Realising our mistakes is a better way we could improve. The topic is really appealing to the readers.
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