Johanna Marie

Germany

Hey there!
My name is Johanna and I'm very much in love with the English language.
I'm a 17 years old from Germany and writing is one of my greatest passions alongside music.

Message from Writer

Feel free to contact me. All the love.

Peer Reviews

"you are such an amazing friend"

PROMPT: Seven Delights

Perhaps think of structuring it a little nice apart from that a few touches and it's a very good piece of writing.

6 months

last night

FREE WRITING

Really loved your word choice and the way you told that very moving story. A few touches here and there and it will be perfect.

6 months

I TURNED THE PAGE AND TIME ENDED

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2019

Really enjoyed this piece!! You're a great writer. xx

over 1 year

The Dragon Surprise

PROMPT: Fantasy Writing Competition 2019

Use more adjectives or synonyms and replace often used words, that will make your story easier to read and much more fun to imagine. Please tell me more about Monteverde, paint a picture. Right now I'm not sure if it is an ordinary city or rather outstanding.

over 1 year

Social Tendencies

PROMPT: Unplugged: Op-Ed Competition

You use words like "It's" a lot try to use alternatives more often to make your text more interesting for readers. Sometimes a different syntax would sound better as well as shorter sentences. But all in all great work. xx

over 1 year