Ephemeral

Pakistan

"We know what we are, but not what we may be" -William Shakespeare

An avid reader and writer with love for all moments that be make me not know whether to laugh cringe, cry or all three.

Ephemeral (Pakistan) reviewed:

An international love affair.

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2019

The way everything is described is so appealing. This is so short and simple yet conveys everything and leaves the reader quite enlightened on the ways that food effects us that we ourselves might not have thought of. While the...

over 1 year ago

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over 1 year ago

Ephemeral (Pakistan) reviewed:

Oh!

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2019

If I was to just casually read this piece and was not aware of the prompt, I honestly would have swooned over it. However, the thing is that the prompt calls for a certain element that has to be included...

over 1 year ago

Ephemeral (Pakistan) reviewed:

Travel Foods

PROMPT: Food Writing Competition 2019

I understand what you were aiming for, and the dart is just a tiny bit away from it's mark. Your setting is unique, every paragraph unusual and I think you can utilise that to it's full capacity by adding a...

over 1 year ago

Ephemeral (Pakistan) reviewed:

Stranded

PROMPT: Earth Day Writing Competition 2019

The start and the end was very strong and that is an accomplishment. The message was clear and bold and the way the fear of the narrator was described really instills fear in the heart of the reader as well....

over 1 year ago

Ephemeral (Pakistan) reviewed:

Petals Singed Black

PROMPT: Earth Day Writing Competition 2019

I think this almost seemed like a sample of an after-math scene I would read in a novel or a book and I fell in love with that. However, that brings an issue of the fact that at times, your...

over 1 year ago

Ephemeral (Pakistan) reviewed:

The Submerged City

PROMPT: Earth Day Writing Competition 2019

Its satisfying, how well written this is, the opening, the ending and the middle all flow together so smoothly that I was really stunned. This not boring and on the contrary, the perfect piece to bring awareness through subtle themes....

over 1 year ago

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Ephemeral (Pakistan) reviewed:

The Plastic Straw Problem- PROMPT TWO SUSTAINABILITY AND INNOVATION (PROPOSAL)

PROMPT: Earth Day Writing Competition 2019

I adored the realism in this entire article and the solutions were really well phased and explained with expenses and even reasoning which made it all look like an article I could read at Forbes and so the standard is...

over 1 year ago