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I don't like the ending sentence, it explains too much of what you are trying to convey. I would leave it to make the reader think about what you mean, rather than just giving the meaning of the piece to them. Other than that, it is really well written and I really enjoyed it!
over 4 years
PROMPT: Defining a term through examples
It was well written! I feel like it needs a little "spice" to make it more exciting to read.
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