Marisol4455

United States

Marisol4455 (United States) reviewed:

Seventeen.

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I don't like the ending sentence, it explains too much of what you are trying to convey. I would leave it to make the reader think about what you mean, rather than just giving the meaning of the piece to...

over 4 years ago

Marisol4455 (United States) reviewed:

16

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Good job homie.

over 4 years ago

Marisol4455 (United States) reviewed:

16

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Neato!

over 4 years ago

Marisol4455 (United States) published:

The Age of Fear

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I have been on this Earth for 17 years to this point,
School. Work. Sleep. Repeat.
I see the same people every single day,
Live the same repetitive routine.
Nothing ever changes... until I think about the future.
The time when I get to leave this little town and see the world.
Meet new people,
See new things,
Actually experience the world.
The future and all it contains beckons my name,
yet there is something inside of me that is...

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over 4 years ago

Marisol4455 (United States) published:

Why Am I Worth Less?

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For days upon end, the only thing that filled my mind was whether I was ever going to eat.
The pain that crushed my chest every time I think about my house that was gone didn't seem to matter.
No more toys, no more books, no more happiness.
Nothing. 
Everything seemed to fade...
The sounds of my mother crying no longer filled my ears
Now only Allah could hear my sister's laugh
The thunderous sounds of bombs that previously made...

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over 4 years ago

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Marisol4455 (United States) published:

When is it ok to grade a teacher?

PROMPT: Op-ed Competition 2016

Every parent dreams that their child will be born some sort of a prodigy that brings home straight A’s and grows up to become an astrophysicist or neurosurgeon, but this often isn’t the case. The grades a student receives in high school often paves their road towards either success or failure, which really puts a lot of stress on not only the student but also those who are teaching them, or so you would think. When a child fails a...

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over 4 years ago

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