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Makayla.Huisman16

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Makayla.Huisman16 (United States) published:

The Choice of Life

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Makayla Huisman

    When I was younger, I never really thought much about the whole abortion debate. I figured it didn't really apply to me and that if it was my choice, I would never abort a child. Now, though, as I have gotten older and learned more about this touchy subject, my opinion and stance has definitely become more defined. I know am a strong pro-life advocate and will let anyone and everyone know my opinion. 
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Makayla.Huisman16 (United States) reviewed:

18

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Nice job! It was funny to read when you said that 18 isn't as great as everyone thinks it is.

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fourteen years

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Very clever to write like this!

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18

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Really unique and interesting!

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17

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    17 is a year of lifelong memories, a time of learning and when you meet some of your best friends. 17 is what every child waits for. It's the time of your life. But is 17 really all that much different than 16 or 18? While we get older, we gain more responsibility and expect new adventures. Having been able to drive at 16 and being a legal adult at 18, how and why does 17...

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Bittersweet 60s

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I thought it was a great poem but there were a couple things that I wasn't very sure about. Some of the things I didn't realize were from the 1960's but but it was an overall well written poem.

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Makayla.Huisman16 (United States) published:

The Nifty '50s

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Makayla Huisman

Travel back to the 1950's
of baby boomers & retro ages, 
new technology & entertainment,
style & life through many changes.

Gunsmoke, Bonanza, Lassie & Rawhide,
TV was new & becoming great.
Movies were still around to entertain,
but this new idea was entertainment's fate.

New music came with the times.
Elvis brought a new style and sound
but don't forget Frank Sinatra
also came & stuck around.

This new age was a surprise to all,
a new &...

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Makayla.Huisman16 (United States) published:

The Nifty '50s

PROMPT: Time Traveler

Makayla Huisman

Travel back to the 1950's
of baby boomers & retro ages, 
new technology & entertainment,
style & life through many changes.

Gunsmoke, Bonanza, Lassie & Rawhide,
TV was new & becoming great.
Movies were still around to entertain,
but this new idea was entertainment's fate.

New music came with the times.
Elvis brought a new style and sound
but don't forget Frank Sinatra
also came & stuck around.

This new age was a surprise to all,
a new &...

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over 2 years ago

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PROMPT: Op-ed Competition 2016

Makayla Huisman
Miss Sahly
College Writing & Research
10 March, 2016

    The desire to win starts with children at a young age. In all sports, winning results in some kind of award, whether it be a trophy, a medal or a verbal congratulations. Even second and third place winners get some sort of award. But should participants get a trophy or medal just for entering in the competition? Participation trophies and medals should not be given in competitions...

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