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Itz_Jubilee

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Itz_Jubilee (United States) published:

Hear My Cry

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2019

Hear my cry,
i am a loner on the face of the earth looking and longing for someone to love me
each day people walk past me, yet my saddened eyes are only overlooked draftily
i scream, "Help! Help!" but no one is there
the fire at my feet rises
i disappear


Hear my cry,
For I am a poor man yearning for a place to call my own. Many surround me on the dark street nights yet I am...

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Itz_Jubilee (United States) reviewed:

Spring has Sprung

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2019

I think the title should be changed because the title is more focused on spring in a positive view when in the poem spring is viewed negatively.
Ideas for Title
1.) All Season are the Same
2.) Spring, Spring,Spring!

5 months ago

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Itz_Jubilee (United States) reviewed:

Seeds

PROMPT: Poetry and Spoken Word Competition 2019

Try to find yourself speaking through the character. Meaning, you speak out on how you feel through this plant in the poem because that will make it more captivating and relatable to the audience.

5 months ago

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